| Reviews for Rise of a King |
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   DarkLightShade chapter 2 . 11/17/2017 I look forward to future chapters of this story. Good job writing overall, but I would like to add that training stats is a lot easier when stats are low in numbers |
| BBWulf chapter 2 . 7/7/2017 A decent start. Hope to see more soon. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/17/2017 You should keep going with the story its really and people want to now what happen next |
| Lexus-Regis chapter 2 . 3/6/2017 more |
| BBWulf chapter 1 . 2/26/2017 Ah, instant OP character. Ok. Was kind of hoping he'd go at least a lil' bit before getting an Overkill Weapon. Seriously, fics like this should be labled as SI/Fantasy Fulfillment. XD Oh well, was an interesting waste of time, I suppose. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/11/2017 this is a really good story please make more |
| dspendragon125 chapter 2 . 1/27/2017 I like it. I don't understand why I do, but I just do. So, yes if there was a thumbs up button I would press it. |
| Cf96 chapter 2 . 1/26/2017 Cool |
| theawsomest5 chapter 2 . 1/22/2017 Can't wait for more! |
| tyson113 chapter 2 . 1/22/2017 Great chapter keep up the awesome work :) |
| Noble the Unknown Primordial chapter 2 . 1/22/2017 Wonderful start to your Gamer story, don't make the same mistakes I did and fill each chapter with info dumps. |
| Raidentensho chapter 2 . 1/21/2017 nice. hmm, i do wonder if there will be jobs in town for quests. no doubt it will lead to the first of many dungeons. hoping that there will be quite the rewards. along with investing the town to really expand it and fortify it. hoping that it will lead to statues showing accomplishments. i do wonder if a Beringle will be just the milestone for his growing fame. i am so going to love this. until then, later! |
| killblade373 chapter 2 . 1/21/2017 Okay one do you have a beta reader or anyone who can look at your chapters to find any grammatical errors you don't find because if not I suggest you get one. two nice job. Three are we going to see any of our gamers training or are we going to skip that and just say he's a walking badass who can rip dragon Grimm (which are a thing in the rwby-verse go figure) like they were little babies or will he still get thrashed a good bit and win by the skin of his teeth. I'm manly asking since alot of gamer fics turn the gamer into a Gary stew and that's not a bad thing it just ruins it after seeing the same thing happen almost every time a gamer fic comes out. Also will you kill off major characters like say jaune or Cardin maybe even cinder? Anyway keep up the good work man I'll be watching to see how you progress your story. |
| 553Colinm chapter 1 . 1/16/2017 Awesome I hope you continue |
| Cold White Album chapter 1 . 1/13/2017 What's so special about Excalibur that every gamer fic protagonist has it like Oprah decided to give out Excalibur's you get a Excalibur and you get and Excalibur you all get Excalibur's |
