...Did you seriously just start off the story by baking Jinx "part of the Thieves Guild which steals from the rich, powerful and corrupt to give to the defenseless, and the poor"?! Wow way to completely remove all moral complexity from Jinx's character and make her a generic Robin Hood figure while making it immediately obvious that this is mean to be a black and white morality story where we are simply meant to root for the main characters due to their obvious moral supremacy over all of their evil enemies...

Yeah... I'm sorry but I'm out. Hopefully you can learn to write actual nuanced plots and characters in the future instead of easy and simple "good vs evil" stories with "the corrupt rich vs. Good (poor) people" being your choice of sides... what a disappointment.

Oh and let's not forget the way the protagonist has extremely powerful and famous parents (who are dead so they stillcontrol their own lives) to look up to that everyone knows about. That always helps to as well as their razor sharp sense of humour ofcourse that leads even their enemies friends to laugh at whoever she feels like poking fun of (with jokes that reinforce her moral superiority of course, as a mean spirited joke for the people arresting her instead of one which points out that this policeman and his friends are crooked and corrupt and everyone knows it is just too much grey in a world of black and white)...