I absolutely love Mey-Rin x Sebastian true love. I'm an eternally supporter for this couple. Please make more stories using this pairing

Great chapter! Cannot wait to read more about Demon!Ciel/Lizzy.

such a perfect sex scene!(they are harder to write than most think)

Great chapter bro see you sometime tomorrow.

what is mey-rins little secret?

glad to clear up what happened to ciel becoming a demon!thanks

Well, that was great of Ciel to troll Lizzie about some of his past, part of relationship progress is about being open with one another.

ERMAGAWSH, AWWWWWWW. This is so cute.

When Ciel was trying to explain his feelings, I was like “Daaaamn Ciel, smooooth.” (hint: sarcasm XP) I love how at the end he genuinely says 'I love you’. The fact that Lizzie was asleep definitely amplifies the sincerity of his words.

Gah, don’t hate me, but the thing I said about commas still stands. The way you’ve used them in that last ADORABLE scene doesn’t really make sense.

But other than that, ’twas fabulous to read.

so will ciel tell lizzie what he is now?he's always loved her in some way-not always as she wanted-but still-will sebastian approve this marriage?

I AM DED.

When Lizzie thought Ciel and Sebastian had a thing, it was HILARIOUS to read Ciel’s reaction. XD He was so horrified! It definitely gets the point across that there’s nothing between them, but also adds some fabulous comedic relief!

Okie, I hope you don’t mind one tinnyyyy note of criticism. In a lot of your paragraphs you have lots of words, but no full stops. It’s all just a bunch of commas! And yes, I love using commas in my work too but I feel like it makes the sentence go on and on and oonnn and that it would be much more effective if you split them into several different sentences. XD

There were a few mistakes in grammar, but let’s be real, GRAMMAR IS HARD so like that’s totally understandable. :D

I thought Sebastian was brilliantly in character. His actions and words felt like they came right out of the anime, so good on you for that!

Overall, I thought this was so cute with the relationship between Ciel and Lizzie. I think this chapter itself could also work as a one-shot because I reckon the last bit is adequate to be an ending. XD

ANYWAYS, enough of my blabbering. Happy writing :D

Well, that was a good start.