please continue

kakak aku mau buat cerita tapi pada bagian pertamanya saya masih bingung. nah pas baca cerita ini saya mau izin pakai. tenang aja enggak semua cuma sebagian chapter 1.

I love your story. One little problem. Harry's fathers keep holding his 'appendix' which would be highly uncomfortable as it is inside his body and attached to his intestines. The word 'appendages' is what you are looking for.

Très belle histoire, la suite promet d'être palpitante
merci pour ce moment succulent

Pourquoi les meilleures histoires ne sont jamais terminées, c'est assez frustrant de se dire qu'on ne connaîtra probablement jamais la fin. Dommage

Well if this story was to continue I would pair Draco with Astoria and Aldwyn with Daphne.

So glad you changed his birth date! With Dumbles the way he is, it wouldn't be good to have it at least ten days early.

Question - does Aldwyn have a new wand? If not, won't people recognize it? And did I miss how they hid his lightning bolt scar? Which chapter was it where Hedwig was killed? Severus mentioned it when he gave Aldwyn his snake. Does he still have his invisibility cloak?
So many questions! I hope you can continue to feed your muse! I'm on a reread. Can't wait until you post again. ;)

This is nit-picky so take it as you will - incredibly short hair wouldn't have a wave to it. And I would think that Lucius would take on the Heir training since neither Tom nor Sev would have had it. But, like I said - picky.

Chapter 9 & 10 have Harry's name is officially called Harrison Salazar Riddle-Slytherin - but you've been having him be Aldwin. Why, was this because of revision?
Also, if his Potter blood was all burned up, how can he retain the Potter vaults? And does this mean he lost the Pure-blood Potter blood but retains the muggle-born Evans blood?

So how are they going to keep the secret of Harry's new name and family when the whole Auror dept heard them speaking when they first arrived?

Hello, I love this, so creative and a nice merge between a ‘kind’ Voldi and good writing.

I personally see a Drarry from the Draco and Aldwen interactions.

Have a nice day,
Preamp

While I can see the relationship between Draco and Harry growing, I would definitely like to see Harry and Bill get together whenever Harry gets older. I never did understand Bill and Fleur's relationship or why they were together. I think I would also like to see Draco get together with either Blaise or maybe even Charlie, but who knows?

I can't wait to read chapter 17 :D!

Sweet

OMG I loved it please tell me your still writing this story please I would love to read what happens when he goes to Hogwarts

Enjoying this story. Just a quick note: your usage of "appendix" in this chapter is meant to be "appendage."