CAN u do more?

Hej
Ville bare lige sige at ideen til den her fanfic er rigtig god
Grammatikken Kunne dog godt bruge en del arbejde.
Derfor vil jeg gerne spørge om du tror det vil være nemmere for dig at skrive historien på dansk. Vis det er sådan så ville jeg tilbyde at oversætte den til engelsk for dig. Så mærkeligt som det er så er jeg faktisk bedre til skriflig engelsk end jeg er til skriftelig dansk.
som kan tydeligt ses her.
De færdige kapitler bliver selvfølgelig posted på din profil, du kan bare sige at jeg er din Beta reader/translater

Ha en god dag
Hilsen Hinop

FAN!~

This is horrible.

Hey you forgot about something. After Law left the Great Hall after leaving behind a STILL beating heart to scare everyone, what did the wizards DO with the heart? He didn't ask and they never brought it up in the Hospital Wing after they caught up with him.

Plus when Minnie brought up the Yule Ball, Law should have flat out refused. 1. He is NOT a student of ANY of the schools so he is NOT obligated to take part in tge ball if he doesn't want to. And 2. Demand to know exactly WHO should he take to the ball even IF he did go? *lol* unless there is a TEACHER whos willing to be his 'date' for the ball, WHY should he ask one of many girls who are all YOUNGER than him to be his date? He should want someone his own age, or older, to dance with, instead of having a immature KID as his date. *lol*

lol its nice! i would like to read more

Okay guys I replaced the chapter, with a few changing in the new one should somewhat explain but if you still don't understand the imagination I currently have, please do write to me ,-,

FAN!~

Isn't this after the two year gap? Law should be 26 if it is. Other than that, the story is pretty cool. I'm betting the goblet picked up Law because Harry was dead and he was the next one in line. I loved the ending with him freaking everyone out so he could blend in with the crowd

You have my attention.

good story love the idea

How'd Law get summoned if it was Harry who was supposed to be summoned? Also where in the H.P. timeline is this? I mean it sounds like it's either in first or fourth year(since Harry's name was called in both).

guess I could look into make one more chapter.

I loved the last bit, that was so funny!

Wait... so WHY did the Goblet of Fire drag the SON of Harry Potter there? Does this mean Laws going to have to do the tournament if he doesn't want to get hit by whatever penalties the Goblet might throw at him despite the fact hes NOT the guy whos name came out?