this is good! you should continue it!

Sorry about my previous post as soon as i pressed 'post review' i realized that maid wasn't from Nazarick, my bad. Anyway awesome chapter please keep them coming

i really liked this chapter but narberal wouldn't talk with her fellow NPCs like she does with humans, even if she was jealous she would still treat her with respect since she is also a creation from a supreme being. Other than that really great chapter

Wish upon a star! Wish upon a star!
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Oh...
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He needs glasses! He needs... or she?
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They both in need of glasses!
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Fun story... keep it up.

This was enjoyable keep it up!

It is slightly hard to read because of the grammar, but the idea is good.
If you need some help rewriting, you can pm me anytime.