A very well balanced story, that was :) You did great with showing the true characters but in a completely new situation. The whole development is smooth and logical, and I absolutely loved this story ️

That was a good first chapter but it definitely needs to be longer and added to

I enjoyed this immensely. The way you described the wolf transformation was brilliant. I just loved it.

Only thing I want to know is if the things the Winchester’s told Bella about the Cullens and wolves is true, or is it just guessing from the other creatures they have met?

Lol not a cross over I've read before but that was fun

Thanks for sharing!

This is great! Funny and fantastic story.

Holy crap! Awesome!

They seem to have a tendency to go off half-cocked, but they ain't dull xx
Alexis

I loved it! So happy-ish right now. Glad for my laptop, because my phone battery barely works anymore and hardly holds a charge before it drains. Bummed. I hope it doesn't cost too much to replace, then again I may have to just get a new phone. Not too happy, but fanfic makes it better.

Good one shot although poor Charlie is going to go home and nothing is there. No home no Bella that will suck for poor Charlie. I also don't think Charlie is as stupid as Stephanie Myers and some authors write him to be. Thank you

Oh boy... Guys you are in trouble.

I can't believe I didn't see this when you first posted it! Love it!

I LOVED THIS AWESOME AMAZING FIC! Truly brilliant writing here honey! ;o)

this was fantastic! you should totally make this into a story

You should definitely write more of this story!

you know this would make a awesome story as this the starter to it like them taking her and teaching her how to hunt so if the Cullen's come back she can protect herself can i use this as a starter to a story this gave me so many great idea's