Drop a tactical nuke on a place with Deatheaters that is far away from civilization and blame it on terrorists. Scare the freak straight.

I'm coming back to this story after almost a year and half seeing as my last review was on may 19, 2019. Plus it's awesome that your still updating this story. I really hope the plot is still as good as it has been, while I catch up to the next 40 chapters.
Keep up the amazing work

to be fair it's a very good story but if you dont like a story about special ops baby siting little children ill say skip this one

Keep it up

Glad that Umbridge got some comeuppance. No magic needed.

As for Eden's usurpation of Voldemort, I'm interested to see how you explain his demise despite the horcruxes. A permanent entrapment in a pocket dimension perhaps?

Still awaiting the Brad/Fleur reunion, and surprised it hasn't happened yet.

Well written :)

Some exciting action chapters there. Tell Brad to stop being stupid.

Okay i have to say that I LOVE what you did to Umbridge, the lady completely and utterly got what she deserved.

YOU KILLED NEVILLE AND CHO!?

After a couple chapters of skepticism, I've been hooked on this story. Interesting, original concept. Excited to see more.

Exciting stuff!

Umbridge's gonna get a prototype laser cannon shoved up her witch ass.

Laser weapons are being developed, right? RIGHT!?

Well, i'd say that Umbridge's days are numbered, not only has she imprisoned a foreign national (who is ALSO the daughter of a powerful member of France's magical community) under very legally shaky reasons AT BEST but she has also started to torture her despite the fact that she has committed no crime (except for maybe trespassing but even then it's pretty shaky at best, legally speaking)! If she doesn't get thrown into the magical equivalent of Gitmo or taken by black ops/Task Force Ansible and tortured at a black site I will be very, VERY enraged.

I agree with the review below me. Never liked the stories where muggle society and wizard society mixes in any way. It's simply just a recipe for disaster. Muggles are too paranoid and destructive to mix with Wizards, and Wizards are too scared of Muggle technology to allow Muggles to see them.

In the end it would be a "who is destroyed first?" type of deal and it takes all the fun out of Harry Potter stories. I think most of us can agree on the fact that we read these stories because of magic and Hogwarts and all those things, not science and technology.

The moment a muggle finds out about obliviatiors, the imperius, or the confundo charm, they'll start plotting to end any relationship with wizardkind. Those 3 spells just have too much power and muggles have no defense. Its a massive plothole for any fix that involves groups of muggles or a muggle government interacting with a magical society. It's one thing to think there are a few hundred individuals who have magical ability in the US. It's completely different to realize there are thousands of wizards who are organized into a society and have almost unlimited ability to alter the minds and actions of any muggle they wish. A wizard could gain access to the best kept secrets of a government, control the president, or steal the most valuable objects in the world without too much difficulty. Any member of a muggle government or military would recognize this and develop plans to take down or gain control of any magical society. JK Rowling avoids this plothole because only one member of any muggle government ever has interactions with wizards and those interactions are very rare and unpredictable. There's no way to prove the existence of wizards, so it's easier to ignore the problem. With large scale interactions, that goes out the window.

For that reason, I'm going to have to stop reading if this story continues down the road I think it will. It's too big of a plothole for me to ignore.