Reviews for NATSU DXD |
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Glitner chapter 6 . 6/12 srsly your just spitting on natsus name now , he could easly taken care of everyonethere by the time he wasa normal human ... and now after 5 years training and unlocking e.n.d geting smarter and more mature he can barly contend with 3 fallen angels who isent close to be a high class ... as i said you your self is making this story shit... your just spitting on his strength tossing facts away and just use natsu as a replacement of issie thats just plain bad authoring |
Glitner chapter 5 . 6/12 whats up with him crying all the time dammit... stop making him act like a pussy its srsly ruining his char... |
MrSunshine744 chapter 7 . 8/10/2019 I like this fic but it feels a little rushed, I'd suggest take a bit of time to slow the pace down and explain situations a bit more, give some context. and for the love of god stop writing "plz" its "please" using that is fine if you are texting a friend but you're writing a story, to be honest it's annoying to read that. |
Scythe of Doom chapter 7 . 7/25/2019 2 |
vaporizer chapter 7 . 7/5/2019 you should update this story next |
Nemesis Lyonner chapter 1 . 7/4/2019 i choose this |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2019 Corny and rushed |
Lifelessman chapter 1 . 12/13/2018 Good Work...! 1 |
bastion0904 chapter 6 . 8/31/2018 I'm missing Asia in my previous comment |
bastion0904 chapter 7 . 8/31/2018 my vote is for Serafall,Irina,Ravel,Ultear,Le Fay,Gabriel(Natsu looks like an angel more than a demon) |
Xdmegaflower chapter 6 . 8/31/2018 my vote is for Serafall, Irina and Ravel |
ivan meza chapter 6 . 8/26/2018 koneko harem |
ivan meza chapter 7 . 8/26/2018 yubelluna, ravel y sona con natsu |
macximu chapter 6 . 8/26/2018 serafall este con natsu |
Silver566 chapter 1 . 6/16/2018 Ok I know this fanfiction but Natsu would never recover like that after hearing he wouldn't ever be seeing his family again. Otherwise other than a couple parts that were somewhat rushed this fic has potential. |