Reviews for naughty girl |
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Roxhall1 chapter 21 . 9/23 Continue please |
Brandi Neri chapter 22 . 3/21 lol loving this would love to read more |
Roxhall1 chapter 22 . 3/4 please update soon |
kimmy397 chapter 1 . 1/25 You need to work on your capitals and punctuation. I know second graders who do better than this. |
Roxhall1 chapter 22 . 9/26/2019 More please update soon |
jaspersmate81 chapter 22 . 8/21/2019 I love, love, love your story! Its amazing! Its so creative & unique (just like Klaus & Isa is). I really like her naughty side. I also love how you are treating the werewolfs' inner wolfs as if they are completely seperate entities stuck inside their "human" forms. The fact that Isa's little wolf can physically hurt her feom the inside, hirting its own host body, was really eye opening & an awesome idea. I cannot wait to read more. I take it from reading your earlier chapters, that Doucheward Cullen was stalking Bella when she was 17? Are the Cullens going to run into our favorite deadly couple at some point in the story? Is Brlla slowly becoming a vampire by drinking Nik's blood daily? Is that why she's displaying vampiric instincts? Please continue this story soon. I cannot wait to read more. |
memememememememe chapter 22 . 7/1/2019 So, I love your story. It’s original and I love the fact that Klaus and Bella just fit together. But a few things, I have a hard time reading it because of the lack of punctuation and capitalization. Each chapter kind of reads like one big run on sentence. But other than that, keep up the good work! |
NatalieLynn chapter 22 . 6/6/2019 Good chapter! |
1dreamkeeper chapter 22 . 5/20/2019 update soon. love it |
traceybuie chapter 22 . 5/17/2019 I love that Nik and Bella are both one of a kind. Great chapter. Thanks for writing. |
Coonkisser19 chapter 22 . 5/17/2019 keep going |
Coonkisser19 chapter 21 . 5/13/2019 please update soon |
Wizards N Dragons Realm chapter 21 . 5/5/2019 oh yeah Charlie finally finds his mate but what a cliffhanger! I was so looking forward to what Gloria found out about Bells. :-( Now I have to wait oh well, great story and I really liked this chapter hopefully Bella can get her wolf under better control also. |
Coonkisser19 chapter 21 . 5/5/2019 it's a cliffhanger that's please update soon |
traceybuie chapter 21 . 5/3/2019 interesting twist... that's for sure. Thanks for writing. |