Please update this story

I'm still waiting for the new chapter

Welcome back and great news to hear that a new chapter for this story is finally coming

I'm still around I been waiting for new chapters for this story for a long time and it's still one of my favorite advance shipping stories I read and it's great were finally getting another new chapter after all this time

This story is great but when is the next chapter coming it's been a long time

Please update this story I want to read more it's been a while since last update and I know other readers want this story to continue forward

This is so much a suggestion as a question. First, let me say I'm liking your story so far I'm intrigued at what awaits ash. Now for the question are going cannon that both goodra and Greninja were released from captivity at the end of ashes kalos journey. If so could he come back to make a reappearance, or perhaps join ashes team? Him and goodra both would be awesome and will ash learn of z-moves? Both him having Greninja and z-moves. I'd like to see Greninja's ikku (battle bond:. Ash-greninja) using hydro vortex any ways can't wait to read more

you gave Arcanine five moves instead of four.

This was a phenomenal chapter! And that plot twist tho, I did not see that coming and I loved that you did it! Can't wait for the next one :)

I already have a pretty good idea of what dawn and melody were talking about and kept secret from everyone else I'm happy the others especially may has finally reunited with ash I know may will be very happy when she sees ash awake this is a very interesting story that's for sure I'm really enjoying it this is just something I thought of and I know it's not planned or anything what if u made a fanfic where ash and melody are the main pairing they are a very rare pairing and they don't have very many fanfics after reading this story I feel like seeing a story where ash and melody do get a chance to be a couple for once they are an interesting pair that's for sure please continue this story it's really awesome update soon I really want to read more of this and it's been awhile since last update

Ohh my gosh I'm so so curious as to what Melody told Dawn I wanna know now loll! I'm so happy Ash is okay and back with everyone, I feel like with him gone everyone was getting depressed but he's back in action. Loved this chapter please update so I can read more :))

It's been some time since I last read this story I have been enjoying this fanfic of yours since the very beginning of it I'm happy ash may and the others finally reunites with ash again I know when may dawn and melody see ash awake there definitely going to give him a hug to show how happy they are not just finally finding him but to see him finally awake from his sleep as for what dawn and melody talked about I think I have pretty good idea on what it is but I'll let the story answer my question when the time comes and even though may and ash will end up together I still like to see at least melody tell ash her feelings and maybe give him a kiss for him to remember melody by that way she can get all that weight off her shoulders and I know this isn't planned or anything like that but will it be possible to have an ash x melody fanfic it's been so long since the fanfic website had a new fanfic involving this pairing plus it's rare and I find these two a really interesting pair and I think they should have more stories involving them anyway great job this story is getting better and better Everytime I read it looking forward to the next chapter

Keep the length of the chapters the way it is now I'm satisfied with it and great job on the chapter but I do hope we don't have to wait to long for may and melody to reunite with ash again I know there's others with him but I feel melody and may are a bit more important characters especially around with ash and the romantic interests they have for him I know may is the one going to end up as ashs girlfriend here I'm happy about that but I still would like to at least see melody tell ash how she feels about him and maybe give him a kiss to remember her by and leave it at that melody and ash just stay very close friends and nothing more than that

Great chapter and I enjoyed it can't wait for the next one and no your good for how long the chapters are I actually prefer them this way instead of being shorter

I think your chapters are at a good length, I tend to enjoy the longer ones because they always seem to have more detail in them. Hopefully Ash will see the others soon!