Oh this story hurt like hell. But in a good way. I have di many feels.

Holy crap, I feel so sorry for Ed! Hoping that the team finds him in the next story but we'll see! C'mon Fullmetal, hang tough until the calvary arrives!

Damn, this is harsh! This story pulled me in and didn't let me out again. A writing! The progression of Mustang and Ed getting closer and more open was really well done. I can't wait to read the sequel!

Been a few months since i read this. I want to read part 2 so im re-reading part 1 first w

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okay, I was crying at the end of chapter 9. HOW FREAKING DARE VINCENT DO SUCH A THING!

Aw yay! I'm so glad we got to see a little of Mustang's team, if only for a bit. Please come save the poor bbys!

Oh nooooooo!

I love the way you write. As simple as it is. You made me shed tears, stare blankly at my screen in pure horror, have to look away in disgust, and for making your story feel alive, I say you are one hell of a genius. Keep going, I look forward to the sequel.
from : someone who obviously isn't used to write reviews

There's a sequel, right?! 0_0

Fucking Bastards! I wish I could make every last one of them feel pain worse than what Ed has gone through a million times over nonstop! No breaks, no pain medication, no nothing! The only thing I would do is make sure that 1. They can't kill themselves, so they would be restrained at all times and in a completely empty room. 2. The only medication they wold get would be to prevent fucking infection and too much blood loss. Can't have them dying off too quickly! 3. A constant dose of that other medicine that made Ed experience even worse pain! They would not be shown mercy if I ever got a hold of them. I would make them fucking suffer, especially Vincent and Corin. Rape a child, will you? Most of all, you rape Edward?! I would make them go through everything Ed did and fucking more! There would be no rest, there would always be constant pain! And they would all be butt-fucking-raped daily by big burly men! And there would be no lube, it would be done dry as fuck.

HOLY CRAP THAT WAS AMAZING I STAYED UP UNTIL ALMOST 2 AM READING THAT! Now I need to read the sequel... SCREW SLEEP I DON'T NEED IT HAHAHA

I absolutely love this story! I like reading about tortured Ed and parental Roy and this was so great! One of the best I have ever read. Thank you so much for writing it :)

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Why.

Why would you do this?

I mean, I know you've got a sequel up and everything, but still . . . this ending was as cruel as the fic itself xD

In all seriousness, wow. This fic was painful :'D My heart has not known such pain in so long. But it wasn't all pain, because Mustang and Ed's father-son relationship really developed through this whole thing, and your writing just got better throughout this whole story. Thanks for writing, and I'll have to check out your sequel very soon ;)

Well that was rather entertaining.

Oh wow this is a wonderful and heat-wrenching story and I didn't expect it to end here. But I'll gladly read the sequel. Happy writing!