Ruby just be out here lesbianing all the girls

I love this story! It's such a great idea, and you did it so well, Keep doing what you do!

I want to know what will happen on Neon's scene

I did like them but...the kiss is the easy part. Making us care about it is the hard part isn't it? I can see the hints here of fuller stories and this is an excellent exercise, but it did just feel empty. Still, they were well done.

These were all so well written, I'm amazed. The range of dynamics with all the different relationships impressed the hell out of me. My favorites were the stories with Penny, May, Raven, and Nora. Was not quite expecting Salem. That went to a dark place.

A lot of these feel like they have stories behind them. Unwritten, incomplete, lacking context. But still you share them because nothing is worse than letting a good idea die without ever being seen. Thank you for letting us see them. Even if we never see the full stories, it was still good fun to read them.

If I were you, I would have posted each of these as their own chapter, spaced every release a week apart. That way, this collection of snippets would get more views and more reviews.

Great, some were better then others, I'd have loved for them to be longer or be more specific about the kiss rather then just the setup or the after math, but they were great little snippets regardless.

Okay, some of these I'd LOVE to see a full story for. Such as the Cinder one, the Yang one, the Raven one, and the Neo one. Pretty please?