Honestly this has to be one of the best books i have a ever read, including professional ones.

The characters are incredibly well written, nothing seems out of place, and i couldn't see anything that could contradict the original storyline.

If you were to ask me i would say the only slight problem is that we didn't get Aliara's reaction to Gon's adult mode which i have been looking forward to, nevertheless you handled her existence in the story in a way that most wouldn't, since in most fanfictions i have read characters either seemed to be flawless or simply uninteresting, in this story however even the tiniest characters that we didn't get much screentime for had such a unique relationship with other characters, for example Libro's interaction with Aliara when she proved him wrong.

I am honestly so awed by how good your writing is, and will probably read most of your other stories.

Well... She's not wrong? I guess?
Though I think that's something only BEST friends do, bordering on siblinghood.

Well... The fic is over but I want to answer this anyway. If you're thinking ice or fire, just take some inspiration from other sources.

Fire;
1. Natsu Dragneel
2. Portgas D. Ace
3. Genryusai Yamamoto (Maybe a bit too OP though)
4. Rei Ogami (has TONS of fire abilities based around the 7 kings of hell, pretty awesome)

Ice;
1. Gray Fullbuster
2. Aokiji Kuzan
3. Toshiro Hitsugaya
4. Yukihina (wanted to complete by comparisons by adding another from Code:Breaker as my last one)

holy shining hairy igniting Tarzan, that's a big big twist.

AHHHH sooo cute~!

I just picture Gon on the other side of the wall, listening, and just silently screaming at Ali for being so close and not following through.

Ok i bing read this and will take a break here because of the torture i will need to read in the next few chapters. ... But overall lovely story so far and im really enjoying it

This scene almost remind me one of the fanfic with OcxPride in FAB, the line wrote “friends hide bodies, bestfriends eat them” or sth along the line lol

Words cannot express how much I loved reading this. You might not be able to read this, but from the bottom of my heart, thank you for writing this story.
I’m not usually one to read OC stories, since I normally find that the characters aren’t well written enough. But Aliara was so much of a complex character that I could easily imagine her as part of the actual anime/manga.
Just so I don’t drone on until my phone’s battery dies, I’m going to cut this short. Thank you for writing, thank you for having the confidence to write (as a fellow author, I can understand this) and thank you for letting me read this wonderful story!

What, you don't hide bodies for you friends?

I loved it. Thanks for sharing !

alluka is their child within herself. tehehe

*uses furnace to bend metal when has the ability to create fire* yes i agree

It’s what friends do

Dude chill u still have Ano