| Reviews for Ashs betrayal chapter 1 |
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   millerr123 chapter 1 . 4/19 Please please please update this story because it is such a brilliant story and I couldn't stop reading it. |
| Toby Hark chapter 1 . 4/17/2019 I loved the plot twists... Please continue the story... You are an amazing writer! |
| Poke-ranger21 chapter 1 . 12/3/2018 please update |
| Jimmy N1 chapter 1 . 6/6/2018 No man no harem please , your story would loose significance and it would become a harem romance story, its better to have ash a single girl, keep lillie that's it,coz she is the only girl i can see ash end up with other than serena or misty. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2018 Please update |
| soundwave7788 chapter 1 . 4/5/2018 Good chapter |
| STARSONGPAPA chapter 1 . 10/30/2017 only one chapter and I'm hooked. |
| bloodmoon633 chapter 1 . 8/24/2017 I like how you are doing this story. Can Mallow be one of the girls with Ash plz. |
| Ty Batto chapter 1 . 7/3/2017 please post new chapter |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/26/2017 pls update |
| HeathLedgersJoker4Life chapter 1 . 4/13/2017 i've read a lot of ash betrayed fanficton's before but this one is the best one yet |
| Megalon 61 chapter 1 . 3/12/2017 This is definitely interesting story here and I would like to see a hearm which means ash can have more than one girlfriend and won't have to to just have one girl end up with ash so I say go with the group |
| NIH chapter 1 . 2/15/2017 I like this concept new chapter before the end of this month please. |
| Gold Testament chapter 1 . 2/4/2017 Not a bad start, but which Mega Stone is Charizard using? Charizardite X or Y? |
| Sonic chapter 1 . 2/1/2017 Make it a hearm please and I hope o e of the girls in the hearm are may dawn and misty my main three favorite paring with ash |
