| Reviews for Not So Delightful |
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  Guest chapter 9 . 12/3/2018 Actually it was revealed that Ashley didn't fall with them. When she got back to the mansion grief stricken over Bruce, David, Lenny, and Constance she returned to normal because her feelings for the loss over the other four had freed her mind. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 12/3/2018 Actually it was revealed that Ashley didn't fall with them. She was knocked out of the boat and did not fall with the other four delightful children. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 12/3/2018 Actually it was revealed that Ashley didn't fall with them. She actually saw them fall and she started crying after seeing the other four fall down that deep hole. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/3/2018 Actually it was revealed that Ashley didn't fall with them. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/3/2018 Actually it was revealed that Ashley didn't fall with them. She actually saw them fall. She returned to normal when she got back to the mansion because her feelings for the loss over the other four had freed her mind. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/3/2018 Actually it was revealed that Ashley didn't fall with them. She actually saw them fall |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/3/2018 Actually it was revealed that Ashley didn't fall with them. She actually saw them fall and she started crying after seeing the other four fall down that deep hole and ran back at the mansion. It is strange but she didn't fall with them. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/3/2018 Actually it was revealed that Ashley didn't fall with them. She actually saw them fall and she started crying after seeing the other four fall down that deep hole and ran back at the mansion. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/3/2018 Actually it was revealed that Ashley didn't fall with them. She actually saw them fall and she started crying after seeing the other four fall down that deep hole and ran back at the mansion and when she got back to the mansion grief stricken over Bruce, David, Lenny, and Constance she returned to normal because her feelings for the loss over the other four had freed her mind. |
 legna.wsit chapter 9 . 8/4/2017 Please do more I love it |
| Kagome Higurashi T chapter 9 . 2/5/2017 I forgot that Chad actually been an undercover KND teen operative. |
| ttte14 chapter 8 . 2/3/2017 Nice job without my OC so far. |
| Kagome Higurashi T chapter 8 . 2/2/2017 Oh poor David, I always hated Cree. And I fancied Chad but not in this story, he's evil. And Now Lenny is back !. I want to know why kidnapped David! |
| Kagome Higurashi T chapter 7 . 1/30/2017 That was a good chapter. I want to know more. I have some questions about the story and I don't know yet where this is going. But got me interested! |
| Kagome Higurashi T chapter 5 . 1/29/2017 Cool story please continue |
