Reviews for Fire of Secrets
Guest chapter 4 . 7/28/2018
Hate how everyone makes kate look a bitch use ziva Shes the actual bitch and abby is too she acts like a 2 year old but apparently only tony is the Child!
Joeylazyj chapter 1 . 11/4/2017
Could you please just leave out kate’s tag if the main porpose is to degrading this character?

I understand that sometimes everyone needs to vent their disappointment towards the real show and the characters they hate/love, which lead to writing things in an extreme, contorted fandom-only perspective, just to get it out, I understand and I skip them. But the basic curtesy is to leave the tag of the person you hate alone, or at least being decent enough to admit it in the summary. Gosh, there are people like me who would search Kate after watching 301 alright, cut us some slack and thank you so very much.

P.s. Second, there’s no such thing called “I don’t mean it” when you are making jokes and rude comments btw.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/9/2017
Ok gibbs is an ass to kate he can push in to tonys life and push and push until he gets what he wants and abby does the same but when kate wants answers shes a bitch? Ugh wow really seeing gibbs and abbys true selfishness in this
Shawn1968 chapter 6 . 7/5/2017
Ok. As I've said before you rock. And if your imagination were to get involved I'd love to see the one step forward and 2 steps back story. Lol
SharonE68 chapter 6 . 6/25/2017
Great story...I liked your spin. And I agreed there are many ways
things can go from now. One thing I would like see is Kate finding out what 'respect' and 'chain of command' really mean with Tony as the teacher. Thanks for sharing.
amaia chapter 6 . 5/9/2017
I expected Tony to forgive everyone, & just do what they all wanted him to do...but you totally surprised me w this story, so thx for that. Your stories are great !
BlueDiamondStar chapter 6 . 4/2/2017
Geez! Unexpected! *flails and falls off chair in shock*

Okay, I kinda expected this to go on about what Gibbs said to Tony about showing and you about changing (3 steps forward 2 steps back) and Abby being Abby loving Tony with her bear hugs and whatnots (if I didn't dream it up I think there was that moment of Tony sleeping on her futon with Berth in a post-SWAK episode, was it?).
So yeah, I really expected them to keep going on and slowly changing their ways so Tony would see they meant it for real.
And to be honest, yes, I craved a bit more of whumpee for Tony either in form of his burns not healing as good as he claimed to be, or getting some injury on duty (maybe getting involved into another building fire with the team tagging along the action and maybe Gibbs getting a burn of his own and Tony getting some more burns and smoke inhalation ending up both under Abby's caring... or something along the lines... *grabs herself and stuffs inside a closet*)

Anyway, I am letting my imagination run too wild so I'll stop and cheer for great story and promising storyline *crosses fingers for a sequel*
lunaz chapter 6 . 4/2/2017
Enjoyed this very much
Hells Bells chapter 6 . 3/30/2017
Excellent story as always .Only just read the final chapter I've been in hospital for treatment after breaking my lower right leg in two places!Need you to post more stories to keep me sane. PLEASE.
bjq chapter 6 . 3/29/2017
awesome
sequel please
monique19 chapter 6 . 3/27/2017
Great story, love you're writing. I still hope that you will consinder to write you're idea.

Thank you for this great story, i love it
royalelephant chapter 6 . 3/27/2017
Such hopeful ending! I like the optimistic feels on the last scene. Gibbs is trying, and they both acknowkedge that Kate is not going to change. I'm just a little sad when I think about that and what would happen with her down the canon timeline.

I hopehopehope that Gibbs would keep up with this new knowledge of his own shortcoming and its consequences. And hopehopehope that Tony would one day learn to see his own worth for what it is: a good person deserving of love and devotion

Tony is the first character that I was glad to hear leaving the series not because I find him lacking but because the character abuse is just obscene. It's very hard to see past Gibbs' neverending 'omnipotent LJGibbs' story arc so I never expect canon to get beter and it didn't, that goodness for fanfiction.

Thank you for the story and the glimse of hope
TheNaggingCube chapter 6 . 3/26/2017
Sadly a more believable story than the show gave us.

We'll donI agree with your option choice.
poohbear123 chapter 6 . 3/26/2017
Great story.
Guest chapter 6 . 3/26/2017
This is a very good story. I hope that you will consider writing more! I Loved both of the ideas you had at the end. I would love to see them try to move on from this how everyone else would treat Tony and see him move to a new apartment and try to rebuild. Great job! Please consider writing more of Tony, I know it's hard now that he left at the end of season 13.
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