Reviews for Of Bumps, Breaks, and Trains
Bkworm4life4 chapter 1 . 1/26
Well done. Love your writing style.
LuvCats chapter 1 . 4/20/2019
Very nicely done. I like your writing style. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/30/2019
This was super cute, definitely put a smile on my face :)
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 1 . 11/13/2018
Jack did great took down two bad guys. then had to deal with both his kids being hurt.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2017
Loved the story. Jack taking care of Mac and Riley was great.
FanaticFangirl2602 chapter 1 . 7/15/2017
So, my dear friend found your fics and recommended them to me. I AM VERY HAPPY THEY DID, BECAUSE OH MY GOSH, THIS WAS AMAZING. THERE WAS SO MUCH FAMILY. AND CARING. AND JACK. AND I'M TOO EXCITED TO MAKE A FULL COHERENT REVIEW, BUT I LOVE IT! Great writing!
Effie17 chapter 1 . 5/11/2017
Cute story
Rehabilitated Sith chapter 1 . 3/22/2017
Loved loved looooved this!
Asuka1920 chapter 1 . 2/8/2017
Can't wait to read more!
lenail125 chapter 1 . 1/29/2017
Awesome. Love this a lot. I love how you write protective Jack
parisindy chapter 1 . 1/25/2017
enjoyed this a lot, thanks for sharing!
Lhaven chapter 1 . 1/24/2017
I love the dialogue you write for Jack - it's definitely his 'voice.' Perfect. And having Mac and Riley in pain and out of commission, needing jack's help is really well written.
302pilot chapter 1 . 1/24/2017
Well this certainly brightened my bad day! I love how gentle Jack can be and the way you write his devotion to his kids is just perfect. Both hurt at the same time is a lot to deal with but Jack did a great job taking care of them. Thanks for sharing!
Gib chapter 1 . 1/24/2017
Happy you posted this over here on . It's easier to favorite for me here. Thanks for sharing.
Dramamama5 chapter 1 . 1/24/2017
Great story. Poor Jack...its tough being the Adult in the group. LOL Good thing he loves his team!