It's really interesting to see someone portray Gon as the possessive one, contrary to most authors who typically are so fixated on showing how messed up Killua is in his love for Gon that they push Gon to the wayside.

I really like many of the directions you took with this, like addressing how Gon and Killua love each other differently (but similarly) in their own twisted ways, but I wished there had been more explanation or nuance in some of the instances you brought up, such as when Killua realizes he's chained to the bed and that he's used to this feeling because of having grown up with it for his training. I don't know, I just feel you could have ridden with that idea longer and made it more dramatic, perhaps even compared Gon's twisted love to that of Illumi's/the Zoldycks' to make it more jarring, and then address why Killua decides to put up with Gon's twisted love but not the Zoldycks'. That's just my wish of course. There are also some instances in sentence structure, vocabulary, and grammar that kind of threw me off/didn't make sense, but this was an intriguing take on the extremes of Gon's and Killua's darker emotions for each other.

Of course, none of this would ever actually happen because both the boys are adventurous and need stimulation in the outside world. But for the sake of the story, let's say it did, in which case I think there's even deeper and darker ways that Gon could satiate his selfishness that Killua would allow (not to be stated here hahaha).

Overall, glad I read it, but also 100% glad it isn't canon. :)

Wow… I didn't expect it to be that much insanely good story.

I love how you pictured it.

Insanely.

Continuation? Please?

A fascinating story, and a concept that was used well.
The only issue I noted is that the final few lines are wrong, stating that it was two months three weeks and *SIX* days before Gon and Killua reunited but two months three weeks and *TWO* days since Killua surrendered. Implying that he surrendered before he was reunited with Gon.

That was interesting and crazy. I'm just gonna silently favourite this.

Your Story Is Just Really Really Awesome! And Its Kinda Like Killing Stalking (A Little) Its Just Very Cool,Awesome And Awesome! I Don't Know What Else To Say! Please Make More!

Your story is really good. I love it. Please write some more

Dear Hanaritsu:

Tiny thing, but - would you really call that summary K-rated?

Sincerely,
Qoheleth