Ok, you wrote this last year
That means you still have a chance of updating, right?
Please
If you’re reading this, just update

please continue this! It's amazing and I would love to see them growing up together and/or forming the titans and/or meeting Jason, Tim, Barbra, and Damian

*sniff* this was precious. I wanna see then grow up together ~~~ please tell me this isnt judt a oneshot XDDD

Great start, I hope you consider continuing this story.

I got past your tenses just fine, this is great would totally be interested in seeing more of this story.

sigh mein heart...

Simple and beautiful.

This story is so cute! Not sure if this is a one shot, but I would love to read more chapters to this story. I hope you continue writing more Teen Titans fanfiction. I noticed this was your first one :) Great job!

I loved the story so far, you managed to capture every moment perfectly and be able to make such a clear picture of the surroundings for the readers that it's turning out to be a realky great story. Hope you keep your enthusiasm and motivation for every following chapter because this right here has potential to be one of the top stories around here! You got me hooked

I just wanted to let you know that you should never combine tenses. If you write a sentence in past tense, please stick to past tense. Don't combine past with present tense because it will leave a bad taste in the reader'so mouth.

Other than that. It was nice story.

Wow, this is cool. Papa bats is always interesting to read. Good job!

amazing fic :) lovely :) love the relationship between Robin and Raven :)

Really enjoying this so far. Though, Raven does seem overly mature for a 10 year old. I understand that given the circumstances, she'd be a lot more serious and grown up than the average child her age, but she just seems too adult to me. I guess it could just seem that way because of the contrast to Robin's behavior.

I think you need to use line breaks to indicate the scene changing. Going from Raven being happy to have met Dick to them being at the Hall of Justice was very abrupt. It almost broke the flow of the story for me because there was nothing to indicate a transition.

Also, is there a reason your story title is in all lower case? Unless it's a deliberate stylistic choice, it just looks a bit sloppy. Some people are turned off of stuff like that. I really shouldn't have looked at that pet peeves thread in the forums. lol