Reviews for An Invisible Hell |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for sharing this one with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was looking forward to reading this story. Now not so much you made Charlie an abuser I don't read story were Charlie is abudive. That is her neglectful mothers job to be the horriblearent. Good luck though |
![]() ![]() Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story! I truly enjoyed reading this |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story was so great seeing all the obstacles being over come and the slow build up was perfect love all the different ways u write Jasper thank you for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i would love to see, i a situation like this. if Jasper just took her and changed her, and the possible ramifications of that. i know half your story would kinda dissapear, sorry. but it would be cool! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful action. Love how you write it. Great story of justice. Thank you for sharing your words. Meg |
![]() ![]() ![]() another great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fabulous story! Thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a really great story. Thank you for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this story... Even though I'm not much of a vamp reader... I was lost on the Guardian's, but no matter... Still a great story... :0) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! Loved this chapter... So glad it ended up being the women who told her... I think they did it better than even the men would have... No matter HOW much Jasper loves her... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad she got away safely... Sad that Alice and them are still worried... I know they'll meet again soon... :0) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Charlie is dead... But poor Bella... |