The only one who is stronger the tabuu... is the author. Lol.

Uh oh yoshi is high! Get him to rehab sat!

Was anybody else hearing the boss music from dream team playing went Mario was fighting solo with heavy zest?

I know the pterodactyls and MAN they are hard as heck to be unless you are over level or have easy mode on. Still hate that enemy to this day.

Ha yoshi needs Benadryl. I guess pigging out all the time finally is taking it’s

Great Ending! Ty. Shantae. Never make a stupid bet like that again! And if you do, at least lower penalty. Glad they learned their lesson! Can't wait to read your next crossover!

Very funny ending as always... You know what they say, if a bet is made, it must be done. That was a really great story! I liked it a lot! It's probably that when I write my version it will have a lot more of details. I also noticed that you didn't show the ending sequence when the Zeekeeper turns the remains of the Dream Stone into a giant Dream Coin...and Dreambert's reaction was priceless. Well, now that the story I really wanted to read is over, I just want to know what's the next story you're going to write. Fairy out!

I was already sleeping yesterday after your reply. Anyways, back to the story. I really loved the Easter Egg you put it in; it made me really want to know how Mario's ancestor was like. I actually never knew that Antasma could pull Dreamy Luigi out of you! Maybe it's because I used a lot of the Luiginary Typhoon Luiginary Attack or because it happens at random. And right now I noticed that your last chapter is up. Moving on!

That fight against Giant Bowser was epic as hell; two characters that become giant in their own games fighting each other! And the parts where Bowser inhales everything into his mouth proves that he kept the vacuum ability he had in Bowser's Inside Story. And like I said before, I thought that the Giant Battle against Bowser was a bit easier than the fight against the Zeekeeper (I died two times at the Zeekeeper battle and I never died at the Bowser one). Your story is almost over... Now all that remains are the fights against Antasma and Dreamy Bowser. I suppose your story will end probably on one or two more chapters.

I laughed when Private Goomp referred the Zeekeeper as 'a chubby sky pig'. I remember that before you reach Bowser, you had to fight Kamek three times, which made me remind of why Kamek was so annoying in the Mario universe. And it looks like Ty and Shantae are being more cooperative than competitive this time around. I guess they're now going directly to Bowser now, since you skipped the two previous Kamek fights. Can't wait to read more.

Sorry for not reviewing yesterday; I had a long day preparing myself for my collage classes, which is going to start next Monday. Anyways, back to the story. You know, I think it was very clever to put this Sonic reference in the giant battle; the move Luigi does in the battle really reminded me of Sonic's Spin Dash. To be honest, I found the Zeekeeper giant battle to be a bit harder than the final giant battle with Bowser. Ironically enough, the Zeekeeper tends to be a very funny character after the battle, especially at the end of the game. And now it's off to Neo Bowser Castle! Going for the next chapter right now!

Aw, I was expecting the Earthwake giant boss to be mentioned, that was one of my favorite giant bosses. I guess I'll put that in my version then. Anyways, back to the story. Ah! The Somnom Woods is my favorite area in the entire game! I also really love the music; it's my favorite one in this game! I like its dream world version a bit more, but I think both are equally good! Good lord! I never expected a boss battle before entering the dream world when I played for the first time! However, this boss was quite easy, even if I had trouble dodging its attacks. I just used the Bomb Derby and the Slingsniper Bros Attacks to quickly finish it off. Now it's off to find the Zeekeeper in Dreamy Somnom Woods! Too bad that Yoshi, Ty and Shantae won't come along... Oh, well. Can't wait to read more!

I was right about Yoshi joining back with them again, although he is not in a good state at all. I felt that Driftwood Shore was very short for me, but I did enjoy both versions of its music (for some reason, the Dreamy version of Driftwood Shore's music felt a lot like something from the Sonic advance games, maybe it's because of its fast-paced melody). That moment when Kamek revealed himself was a very shocker one, but I was actually expecting that. I mean, everyone in the island fell asleep because of the Dreambeats, so obviously Peach would of have fallen asleep too since she was in Pi'llo Castle, and Bowser would of had come to take her immediately. Looks like our heroes will need to head back to Dream's Deep and then Wakeport to locate the Zeekeeper! Looking forward to the next chapter!

I forgot that Bowser didn't know about Antasma's true form until they reach Mount Pajamaja. I remember that Dreamy Mount Pajamaja's area was very long, so it made sense for you to skip a lot of the parts. The giant boss battle with Dreamy Mount Pajamaja was very awesome too; who knew that the own mount would have its own spirit like the Dream Stone? Even that, I'm still confused of how the Dream World portal reappeared in the game; it if was because of the eruptions, then I didn't get the logic. But if it was the Dreambeats that stopped, then it's very easy to understand. I guess it's off to Driftwood Shore next, and I hope Yoshi would join them again. Can't wait to read more.

I still loved the BEEF jokes the Massive Bros do. Mount Pajamaja's music really makes you feel like you're at the top of the world, very different than the other mountain themes I've heard in my favorite franchises. Also, that part with Yoshi and the fountain really turned out to be funny than I expected! Sad that he probably won't reach the part with the Dreambeats... I was smiling that you made Mario and Luigi fight Mammoshka with their Fire Flower power up, because coincidentally, I used the Fire Flower Bros Attack a lot when fighting Mammoshka (I know that the Dropchopper Bros Attack is found in this area, but I prefer to use it at large groups of enemies). And now the group is about to face Bowser and Antasma with their Dreambeats...