Reviews for A Moment in Time
your kidney 4lunch '3 chapter 1 . 12/28/2018
I wasn't expecting that but I am more greatly pleased than if I had gotten what I came for.
ILoveSxS chapter 1 . 3/21/2018
this was good
Guest chapter 1 . 12/17/2017
this was just so sweet. its good to see that there are fics about them that aren't based on being a ninja. but i wish u cud make a sequel to this. just something that shows they're happy with each other in the future with possibly some kids
Thornado chapter 1 . 11/11/2017
My heart.
ivegotpurple chapter 1 . 7/1/2017
That was an interesting turn of events. I wasn't expecting it, but it was sweet. I like how you described the change in Madara's feelings. The inclusion of Izuna was great, too. It really emphasized that not having Sakura with him was making Madara go a little crazy. I enjoyed reading this!
LightFiction chapter 1 . 5/18/2017
I read this li'l story a couple of months ago I think and kept the tab open on my phone 'cause I knew I would find some time one day to drop a short review.
I really really liked this idea for madasaku. The characterizations were interesting and your writing is beautiful for example '"That is the equivalent of wanting to go into the underworld with Hades, little girl." that' so poetic!
Also, I just loved this part ''He had once joked that she wasn't at all like other women. And she had replied it would be better for him not to categorize women as selfish harpies just because he did not understand their motivations.'' Yesss, I need women supporting women as I need water to live. Also kinda shows the perspective that the authoe has so kudos to you.

I don't know how difficult or easy it was to write about Sakura's condition but you did such a good job, it was so realistic. Not a fairytale where love can solve any problem.

And also wanted to add that the part in the office with Izuna was amusing. Izuna was left gaping haha. Interesting to imagine the reactions and gossips.

Thank you for writing and sharing!
Nicole chapter 1 . 5/3/2017
Your writing is amazing, oh my gosh.
LChan3706 chapter 1 . 3/12/2017
I absolutely love this! Great job. I hope you continue this some time
ofmiceandcourtney chapter 1 . 2/25/2017
I hope this isn't just a one shot I want more of Madara and Sakura! It's really good!
AprilAlice chapter 1 . 2/13/2017
This is a beautiful story. It's depression she has, isn't it? I've been through it myself. It's heartwarming for me that Madara would be with her through it. Thank you for the beautiful story. And, could you possible continue this gem? I would love to read more of it.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/11/2017
Nice!, it was a fantastic read.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/10/2017
Omg I love this! I hope you make more of this magic. XD
JigokuShoujosRevenge chapter 1 . 2/7/2017
I like how Sakura's issues weren't fixed by Madara, but hindered her relationship and had Madara become a way of support.
satsuma-chan chapter 1 . 2/6/2017
I think this was great! Sweet and simple with a gruff, awkward Madara and a witty Sakura. Love it.

It's also awesome that you've touched on mental conditions too. Usually conflicts are written as some sort of big change that happened but here it's something that already existed in her. It's so sweet that Madara catches on fairly quickly after he pushes her to explain and he doesn't look down at her for it! Yes, but plus there.

Sakura's fear of being scorned and Madara putting her heart at ease just made me awww...

The ending line is very Madara-ish. Looking forward to more MadaSaku from you.

p/s: I like that Izuna is still alive and kicking. Madara needs him hahaha
SectumSemprae chapter 1 . 2/5/2017
I love this! Especially that you touched on Sakura's mental health. It's something present but never really discussed in the manga, and it always struck me about her. Thank you for including it. The way you describe and capture her emptiness, I can relate to it. And I love Madara's tenderness toward her.
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