The last third really lost me. It just sort of felt like you were on a roll at the beginning and then you haphazardly tied in an ending.

Would be good to have some context for this fanfic

Why the hell would they adopt children and not have any real ones? That sucks :(

So the Potter bloodline will end with Harry!? WTF.

ehm... some of it was well written... but... the plot was kinda hard to follow.