Reviews for Closer
Yuuri Tsuzuki chapter 2 . 2/19/2019
Please update soon
Guest chapter 2 . 12/21/2017
This is great, I hope that you continue it. Will Shinobu tell Miyagi why Tachibana was really there and photographic proof. Also hopefully Nowaki won't start a fight at Hiroki's work place.
aya-chan chapter 2 . 10/3/2017
curious...
about miyagi and shinobu baai. do really shinobu sacrifice his relationship with prev than miyagi?
update plsss
Shiranai Atsune chapter 2 . 9/7/2017
Man, I love re-reading this over and over!

I hope you update soon!
Guest chapter 2 . 8/28/2017
Where are you :(
Guest chapter 2 . 7/31/2017
YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS!
Guest chapter 2 . 5/6/2017
So excited for more! Looking forward to how all this turns out.
Hope it will be a long thrilling story.
You seem like a newbie here... can't wait for you to show us what you've got.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/6/2017
I love it! Please update!
DrarryDay chapter 2 . 4/7/2017
PLS UPDATE DX I KEEP CHECKING BACK AND THERES NO MORE? D;;;
Seijiro Dazai chapter 2 . 3/10/2017
Great story-it makes so much sense that the ukes would have stalkers, especially considering how protective their semes are. Akihiko and Miyagi's protective sides are well displayed in JJR but not so much for Nowaki so I'm looking forward to seeing it more here. Concerning the stalkers, I like Rei-he seems the least creepy so far, but I wonder how his one-sides acquaintance with Misaki began. Actually, I wonder that about all of the stalkers. As for Isakawa, I feel like half of the reason I think he's creepy is because of how well you described his sickly appearance. Also, his forwardness alarms me. As for Tachibana, he seems pretty much evil-I hope you'll save Shinobu, but either way I'm excited to see how it turns out. You have a good writing style so please do keep writing more for the story. Also, thank you for the Japanese words-I always like to learn more. I'll try to wrap it up because I know this review is inordinately long, but the last thing is concerning the YouTube channel, my advice is to go for it. Thank you for a good read and I will look for more!
soob chapter 2 . 3/10/2017
Seriously the description of this sounded perfect and I love it so far. Please update! It's like my favourite 3
Guest chapter 1 . 2/18/2017
Somehow, I want the stalkers to win.
Shiranai Atsune chapter 2 . 2/14/2017
What Isakawa should've done was to make Hiroki feel sorry for him and then make him fall for him at a later date.
Shiranai Atsune chapter 2 . 2/14/2017
Oh Misaki... so naive. But it's understandable considering how no one would even come near you. YES! Rei and Misaki are getting close and I love reading a jealous Akihiko- who knows Rei's intentions at first sight. Hehe, can't wait for more~

Is something wrong with Isakawa? He doesn't seem too... healthy. Or is this part of a ploy to get Hiroki? And he's pretty straight, direct, and pretty blunt. Asking him out already? Fast/quick. Isakawa doesn't know about Nowaki? He's serious and creepy. If he wants to steal Hiroki he has to be less creepy and more careful, and he shouldn't have told Nowaki because now he will be on guard.

AHA! BLACKMAIL! TACHIBANA IS GOOOOOD! The other two could learn a thing from him. Rei is taking it slowly and befriending Misaki... he's trying to make Misaki fall for him for real and have him voluntarily and willingly leave Akihiko right? Isakawa is too creepy, direct, forward, straight, etc. ...not sure about his chances but I'll wait and read and see.

Shinobu is definitely going to accept. I mean... seriously, what else? I would choose to sacrifice myself. Wait. Does this mean he's going to break up with Miyagi? I mean, he can't be with Tachibana and Miyagi at the same time. Tachibana would want him all to himself and Shinobu can't two-time Miyagi. ...YEP! GETTING GOOD, TERRORIST!

Do Rei, Isakawa, and Tachibana know each other?

...have Misaki, Hiroki, and Shinobu realized that stalkers are after them? I'm pretty sure Hiroki is, but isn't too bothered by it.

YEEEY! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE! THIS IS A GREAT STORY!
LadyKuchiki4709 chapter 2 . 2/14/2017
I feel sorry for Shinobu, he has the worst stalker. As for Hiroki, I'm sure he can handle his without even Nowaki's help.

I would love to learn Japanese even just a few words every chapter so please add more Japanese words. Thank you.
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