How did tecna did get a registeel?

Just so you know a trainer can only hold 6 pokemon the rest get transported other then that it's still a good story

Can't wait to read more.

On the whole this story's not bad. One point I would raise though is your dialogue. It's a fairly common writing weakness I've seen, but with dialogue specifically focus a bit less on grammar and such and a bit more on making it sound natural. Contractions, sentence fragments, etc. are part of how people talk and dropping them makes your characters feel stiff and unnatural.

nice beginning you did

So interesting go on