I love the "hurt Mac" stories because you get to see the "caring family" when they gather 'round to take care of him, but it was nice to see the caring side of Mac as he took care of Jack in this one. Keep up the good work :)

You did great! Good job! :D Thanks!

I love hurt Jack. There's not enough hurt Jack stories. So I love any story I find. You did good. And I love Jacks accent .

Great story, thank you for writing this

HAhahahahahha! I'm sorry but I loved their interaction. Can I get more? seriously?

Love this story, so need more hurt Jack stories *hint hint*. Thank you for writing this

Really great story, i like how Mac was so uncomfortable with trying to help Jack. Hope you will write another :)

Again, lovin' the banter between the boys! Great job!

Very good story. Can't wait for you to do your "homework" again! Thanks for writing.

I love this. So, so much. And as a southern girl I also will account to my accent getting much much worse when I am tired. I don't want to see what it might be like with an arrow through my leg. lol.
Congratulations on your newest addition. Sweet Cairo. Two words as a very experienced rescue worker. Crate Train.! And socialize. lol Good luck and keep up with the writing as much as possible. You have been missed.

Thank you for sharing!
ridley

Excellent fic! Coming from another southerner who's proud of her accent and a crossbow sharpshooter...

This was perfect. I love how you write them both. Looking forward for more stories...

Perfect!

Nice job-you nailed their voices and reactions and I loved how you wrote Mac's awkwardness in the "caregiver" role. He's so concrete and fact oriented. I can so see him saying 'actually, taking the arrow out is gonna hurt way worse'...and I can see Jack's incredulous look. And I love how bad he drives! Poor Jack. Loved this. Thanks for sharing!

Great story! I think you really captured Mac's struggle to help Jack, often saying the slightly wrong things (meaning well), and being just a tad awkward. Yup - that's Mac. And you have Jack's 'voice' down perfectly - how he would react, what he'd look like when in pain, etc. thanks for writing!