Not bad for a first try

god i love 30 year old marco

Awesome

Y'know, I can totally see this happening. They had a VIBE goin' on there before Star came in. I really liked this-it's nicely written and they're both realistic and in character.

Also, your disclaimer had gullible me very, very confused for a moment before it hit me, and then I laughed for a minute straight.

Not trashy enough

Okay see this is what I was hoping for when I checked out to see if there were Marco/Heckapoo fics. Total romance between the two. I mean Heckapoo is like super cute plus with how Marco looked, and acted when he was in her home, it was like there was romantic history with them throughout the trial. Plus when she was all like "You got the mark of Heckapoo son!" it's so easy to think there was more to it that they didn't want us to see. Like maybe her staking a claim on him before Star and Jackie.

After the last episode I realised this is the true OTP I've been waiting for. The fanfic is great, sticks to their personalities yet gives us what every shipper needs.

The two Tsundes in Marco's life Janna now Hpoo

AHHH!
This is so good!
I think I ship this now for some reason.
It's kinda just fun to imagine what happened over those 16 years.
This is really amazing for a first try(And just in general!)

Hi, i love this fic. Hekaco its my new best ship, and i need more. because... its 16 years... something happen in 16 years, they looks so much like friends in the episode

The moment the episode ended I was starved for more Markapoo (as some have called it)! And your writing perfectly satisfied that need. It was a perfect little snapshot of Marco's adventure with just the right amounts of sexual tension and budding friendship. Not too little, and too much.

Thanks!

Nice little one shot. Decent amount of description, good use of the materials. Ahh, so satisfying that someone made a piece for this ship.

how about heckco

Pretty good, I definitely dig the new ship.

Great oneshot. I've got to admit to being a fan of the pairing as well.