Your character Rain is super annoying.

But she can't get more ammunition in middle earth! D:

The original choice of the peredhil wasn't like that, they could keep their elvish life or become mortal. But if you do a change of that in your fanfiction, you get the problem that Aragorn could choose that also, as a descendant of Elros as well. And I think he would for Arwen and for the love for his foster father.

Is this dead?

I know a post from 2018 I have no life I think pretty early 2000s that's a way to say to that last chapter the protagonist Legolas Prince of Legolas when talking to the car before being knocked out she claims have no knowledge of his Royal titles and yeah 2018 nose and look at this so what I'm saying it

Where us Glorfindel?

Is Rain part Native?

...The first thing I thought when I began reading was "This is me." But y'know minus the "Senior NCO" part... *cough*

Please please update, i am dying to know what happens, whats in Rivendell and what Rain decides

Love it, I hope you have not forgotten us, we your loyal followers. We have missed you, and would like to here from you again.

Well at leas the summary was somewhat honest at being a die hard OMG I LOVVVVVVVVE LEGOLAS AND YOU GOTTA GIVE ME ONLY GOOD REVIEWS OR I'LL FREAK! type of fanfic.

Happened upon your fanfic from a writers favorite list. I like Rain. I sometimes give in to a legomance FF and rarely do I like his romantic interest. I love the name of the dog too...is it bub-pup? You get right into the attraction they feel but I hope it grows to something deeper. Having fun reading your story.

like

they 'napped her from her world?! Wonderful

um you think she is only a little peeved? she is a lot Peeved at him.