| Reviews for Naruto the String Demon |
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   VoidWolfie27 chapter 1 . 6/20 Plzzz continues ze storiez |
| SantoryuSekai chapter 1 . 3/30/2018 Very man, Doffy is a baddass villain. More chapter please. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/20/2018 Please update |
| Icon of Sin chapter 1 . 9/22/2017 Karin and Tayuya |
| Jss2141 chapter 1 . 8/25/2017 More, more, please more! |
| ShadowMechanic chapter 1 . 6/7/2017 you have my undivided attention |
| draco7347 chapter 1 . 3/18/2017 love story cant wait for new chapters |
| ZIANstryKER4 chapter 1 . 3/13/2017 I agree with Tayuya; his laugh is annoying as fuck! You seriously need to tone it down. |
| kage88 chapter 1 . 3/10/2017 interesting |
| Ryou Kuroda9 chapter 1 . 2/25/2017 I love these types of naruto fanfiction I can't wait for more. |
| bladetri chapter 1 . 2/18/2017 like XD |
| ChunkyFunkyMunky chapter 1 . 2/13/2017 This story is a bit mushy right now, but hopefully that changes. I'm really wishing for no pairings, but if you do, seeing as how this story is just Naruto with One Piece elements, not a true crossover, choose a girl not paired in canon Naruto and is somewhat like by most people (not Karin and Tayuya), and for the love of God, don't do a harem; they are so absurd, and they never work, making the story unbearable to read. I also hope that Naruto acts more like Doflamingo and not as friendly (and reasonable height). |
| Shade1998 chapter 1 . 2/13/2017 Ino u could make her craziness match with his craziness |
| Elyxthaxzus chapter 1 . 2/13/2017 Can only go Karin and Tayuya from this point. |
| The Storm Master 567 chapter 1 . 2/12/2017 I say go Karin and Tayuya. Maybe throw in Handcock as well. She's super strong and could give Naruto someone to rule by his side. |
