What do you mean attacked from out of site. Or attacked from out of sight. Both sound the same but one means not seen, the other is a place. Correct to what you mean.

Good job on the story so far! Keep it up

pls update i really want this story to continue

nice story so far looking forward to reading more. keep up the good work. )

Hey, I just want to say that you're a great writer and I hope that the negative reviews don't get you down. Can't wait to see the next chapters!

This was mostly well made, but you didn’t describe his skill in a smooth way. It feels blocky and info dump style, which isn’t good for a story. I don’t think you should have even listed his skills at all, since you displayed most or all of them when he fought kakashi. Also, we don’t need to know his training regime, it’s redundant when you list his stats and abilities. Also, next chapter, you say that Naruto’s with weights speed is on par with Lee’s max speed, but earlier you said that naruto was on par with anbu black ops operatives in his weighted speed, which Lee is only low jonin level, and the weight you listed for how he got that fast is completely inaccurate - I could easily walk around with the 225 pounds you marked for his weights next level.

Why not keep it as Naru-Hina?

PLEAAAASE MAKE MORE

A pesar de la prepotencia de Ino para que Naruto la entrene... buen capítulo! Pero porque Naruto tiene que entrenar a otros? Tienen sus sensei después de todo... y el también debe avanzar y no malgastar sus clones

I would actually like to see a smart or even super prankster lose his cool while waiting on Kakashi and knockout both his teammates, tie them up, and gag them.

Not that I'm not happy brutal getting trained there no way he would be able to do any of that on his first day of training at six... Maybe in 3-7 days but not one with no previous training.

r u stil writing

Have you been okay these past few years? I was wondering if you're up for another update, even though it has been a while. You don't have to ofc, the story is just so good and and update wouldn't be so bad. Thanks for the story, nonetheless! It was really good!

I had hoped that Sakura would get killed or at least hurt in the fight and abandon her ninja career so that Haku could have replaced her on the team..

Loving this story! And oh my word, what he did to that old perv was awesome! Hahaha!