its really good

Okay, could u put on the next chapter then?

Please update.

Well this would have been a great story if you had finished it.

I can't say I particularly LOVED it. It was very confusing. Do you edit this AT ALL? The sentences seem to poor out, each one having no relation to the other, there for making dialogue unrealistic. "For at least three days?" That sounds more like a though than something someone would actually say in casual conversation. You need waaaaaaaaaaaaaaay more discription, and "Ron was angry" doesn't cut it. "angry" is not a good adjective. How about "annoyed" or "irratated."

However, I love the idea of Harry saving Sirius.

Why don't you re-write with the tips I gave you? Find a beta, too, they always help.

HEY i LOVED this - cant u please update and finish it? PLEASSE? PRETTY PLEASE WITH SUGAR ON TOP? ill review every chapter... ;)

i like the plot line so far :)

good grammar/spelling aswell

cool story! But it hasn't been updated in 5 years, so there's no point in asking you to update.

Good story start, though!