Great story so far - however I noticed you had Artemis explain a second time to all the hunters about Camp Jupiter after she had the Night before so if you come back to writing this story you might wanna redo that little bit of the dialogue in the 16th Chapter, maybe there was a big gap between writing those Chapters so you forgot you had already done that idk, just thought I'd try and give a helpful tip - I know it'd been a few years but if you get the urge you have a really good plot line going here. _

UPDATE OR KILL

excellent chapter

This is AWESOME! Please continue soon!

nice

Is percy sadistic for a reason? Or just cause?

nice

Nice

But why not use sparks from Percy paring the claw sword and use that to make a flash?

NO DEH CLIFFHANGER

No I do not enjoy the cliffhanger I NEED to know about this scream thing post again soon PLEASE

excellent chapter

Very good is zoe gonna come back or is this not one of those stories? Also if she does then don’t forget bianca, cause too many authors only bring back makes me sad for bianca

Good so far, a tip many people do is don't make Percy a lap dog or overprotective of the hunters. For the fighting, you seem to have some points when he seemed to block it and others were he doesn't, that could be luck. For example, when Atlanta fired at Percy and he sliced the arrow, that seems to be the same amount of skill as for Percy to dodge Beths blow with the dull part of the sword.

and a little idea

well, since he is connected to the sea, well why not give him a similar a ability to fish,

the ability to change his gender, like rich change their gender and grow opposite sexual organs why not give percy said ability

thx for mentioning me and looking at the idea

well if you want some spells (as they don't really give any in the series) try looking up

"witches of east end spells season one" and then change from season one to seasoned 2

they give good spells that don't focus on powers