Reviews for Cards |
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Guest chapter 1 . 3/13/2017 Aw, that was sweet, but the ending felt a little rushed. This could easily have been a few chapters long to allow for a gradual build up of the feelings and a discussion at the end about what the choices are in depth. I mean, it's a huge decision no matter what they decide. He gives her the choice but what does he really want? What do they know about each others worlds? You are a good writer so you could easily make an expanded story work. |
Roksolana chapter 1 . 3/9/2017 I love this story so much! |
Elfalas chapter 1 . 3/4/2017 So sweet and poignant. I really enjoy this. |
melodycraft chapter 1 . 2/24/2017 Yay for plot bunnies! This was lovely. Kinda want to know how the rest of the evening went down- eyebrow waggle- but I can guess. |
MyraValhallah chapter 1 . 2/19/2017 Lovely story, short, sweet and thoroughly enjoyable. Thank you for sharing- I love your 'Guardian Angels' story and I look forward to seeing what future Labyrinth stories you may write |
owlquote chapter 1 . 2/19/2017 This was sweet; oddly a little melancholic, but sweet :) |
LovelyAmberLight chapter 1 . 2/16/2017 Beautiful |
FoxyBoxy chapter 1 . 2/16/2017 You and I had the same plot bunny, but mine came through a different tunnel. Hehe. (You even came up with idea of Sarah moving to England - although in my case, she won't exactly have a choice... *dun dun*) I loved reading this story alot. Had an interesting ending as well. And the fluff... all the feels. Loved it! |
SarahlouiseDodge chapter 1 . 2/16/2017 wow that's lovely |
CharlieBoneFan chapter 1 . 2/15/2017 So cute! |
pearlrose33 chapter 1 . 2/15/2017 Awesome story. Love your writting. |
Jediavenger chapter 1 . 2/15/2017 Awww! So sweet! Cover that fluff in chocolate, stick it in a heart shaped box and your good to go lol |
Lylabeth 1 chapter 1 . 2/15/2017 I read this the day after Valentines Day in a few snatched moments of quiet; loved it. Written very well and not over sentimentalized. |
Kou Shun'u chapter 1 . 2/15/2017 Haven't read a labyrinth fic in quite a while, and this was lovely and left me wanting more. However, one thing sits on my mind-how did she ship the dresser and at what price?-did she travel with it by boat? |
tonemara chapter 1 . 2/15/2017 Awe. I love this story. Such a touching, magical ending for a true fairy tale. Keep up the writing. I await more. |