Hoping for more when your back. Stay safe during these trying times!

hoped that you'd one day continue this!

Awesome please continue

Story was alright. I liked it at first and it dived real deep into Weiss’s emotions and stuff. I liked some of your ocs they were okay.

Now heres where the problem lies.

1. Why do they keep saying soldier? He’s a ninja there is a difference and it sounds real dumb when you say “he pranked his troops” that just sounds plain dumb.

2. Naruto has never killed anyone before. He has led to the death of some sure but he has never actually spilled blood on his hands.

3. Why is naruto so paranoid and stuff? This whole story focuses on him hiding his abilitys and staying a secret it holds back the story. Naruto is a carefree person and does whatever the hell he wants and thats clear from the beginning.

4. Why have him lose both of his arms if he’s going to simply getting a prosthetic? That makes no sense.

5. Why are you getting rid of Kurama? You spent all this time developing there relationship and now your like “sike he’s gotta go so it wont be awkward when it gets sexual” thats just dumb. Keep him its clear Naruto needs him so just keep him,

And lastly stop being stupid. Nobody cares about realistic. This is the world of rwby this isn’t earth just have him speak damn english perfectly already it’s annoying to translate and try and figure out.

please make more chapters

Hey, do you ever plan to revisit and work on this story again?

God Eater and Akame ga kill crossover

Next chapter.

This isn't bad, but at the same time I'm not sure you have the basis for a full story. Naruto tilts the world too much. When he was brought in you set up a scenario so he would lose his arms, presumably so you could eventually replace them with fancier replacements, but, really, why would this Naruto need them?

Realistically, a Naruto crossover probably works better with a different character with less potential. Sakura, could say get tossed in by Kakashi's Kamui by mistake, or to save her, etc, and she could work fine. Most of them could. Naruto might even work at an earlier point, or if he lost the nine tails chakra.

This story is fucking awesome update soon

Nice work

Another good chapter

Good job

Great job

You do know that he could instantly learn their language through ninshu right?