Love your work! Always happy to see an update. Can't wait to find out what happens next!

Poor Prowl's still having a rough time.. And Jazz has some explaining to do once the crazy chaos is over...
Interesting take on Arcee, I haven't seen her portrayed this way before.
Hope to read more soon :)

Damn, that is a cliffhanger. I love this story, I can't wait for the next update. Interesting situation with bonds!

I love this story! The whole road trip/revolution/assassination plots are all worked in extraordinarily well! I really enjoy reading this and I can't wait for the next update!

well I am not going to lie I had been had been hoping for a jazz/prowl romance, but I guess I will take it. Anyway there are placeses where its kind of hard to follow whats happening. You switch between POW with out warning and with out telling so it gets confusing. And sometimes its hard to tell who is saying what, but non the less its an interesting plot and I look forward to reading more.

You had me terrified for a while but I'm glad Prowls not dead, I'm also wondering what Jazz was going to ask him at the end...
Keep writing Keep reading Nova out ; )

I don’t think Prowl will be too happy when he finds out everything Jazz and Lockdown have been hiding from him. An innocent mech died so Jazz could spare Prowl... and Prowl can never go home. And he’s officially ‘dead’. :( I look forward to the next chapter.

not to sound rude, but I am suprised at how good this story is turning out to be. And I am curious is this a jazz/prowl fic? In a romantic sense I mean?

Wait wait wait, I thought Locks mission was to recruit the kids, Jazz and Prowl and Lockdown? Plot twist! Love this story, id really like to know what happened to our little trio...
Keep writing Keep reading Nova out ; )

this is really original and I love it. You are a pretty good writer, but the flow is a little weird at times. looking forward to the next chapter.

I am loving this story! It's fantastic! The whole dynamic between the three is great, but you have also built up an air of suspense and intrigue what with Jazz's job to, I assume, kill Prowl. I can't wait to read more!

Great story, can't wait for more. Your writing is really good.
Keep writing Keep reading Nova out ; )

this is really original and I love it. You are a pretty good writer, but the flow is a little weird at times. looling forward to the next chapter.

This is so EXCELLENT! I love this! I can't believe I haven't read this sooner, it' so good. I love how you write the characters and the way you conduct the narrative. It's such an interesting take on Pre-War Cybertron, and I enjoy how you write the Decepticons and our main three. I can't wait for the update on this! Please keep up the good work!

Great story! I like the theory about bumblebee you put in. I can't wait for more. :)