Reviews for Haze |
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EagleTsubasa chapter 1 . 7/27/2017 An interesting prospect, yet with a fundamental flaw. If Yukine had stolen the money, Yato would have been stung, and he would have known straight away. As he didn't steal the money, Yato wouldn't have been blighted, and therefore, Yato could easily tell that Yukine was not the one at fault and that it had been someone else. As it stands, thus chapter makes little sense, unfortunately. Might I suggest that you redo it with ideas that make sense before you write any further? Don't be afraid to ask me about your ideas if you're worried about them. I'm a beta-reader, so I'm happy to help. :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/13/2017 Please update soon |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/9/2017 Please continue |
zaviour chapter 1 . 2/18/2017 You should continue. |
karnos chapter 1 . 2/18/2017 Looks promising |