Pretty sure Gemi is male while Mini is female although that just speculation from anime voices and thier eclipse form

Hello again but you know that the whole galuna island arc was not that big. You are wasteing chapter on such a snall arc. I mean more than 10 chapter for the galuna arc really?! come on .

Great story but the chapters are too short, make them longer.

PLS DONt let LUCY IN thE HArem SHe'S FKING TRASHHH JUST USES NATSU TO PAY HER RENT AND DONE JUST SAYS NO to EVERY MISSON SHES FCKING TRASHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Way to go Natsu 10/10 with the perverted thoughts

Gemi is male and mini is female. BTW I noticed that you wrote that Lucy had Saggitarius a few chapters ago. Saggitarius is the key that Lucy gets as a reward after the Galuna arc. That aside the story is really good.

hi your story is good but I want to ask are you an idiot because who takes more than 10 ch to complete one arc man

Also in the reboot Natsu could train Lisanna so she is strong enough to not get sent to Edolas.

Just cut down the Harem, you made it so every known female in the show is in his harem which is a bit overboard. about 3-4 girls is enough but 50 come one it's extremely extremely stupid

i have read more than 20k fics in last 7 years,every one with above at least 10k words but none with a summary as unfitting as this one. even if the plot is decent

Really I do not end because of everyone hating him as Erza for example do not know why she hated him, but with the "reform" of history you will replace existing chapters or create another story even starting from scratch?

Does that mean you will rewrite the entire story? But good to see you back, man.

Lo único q veo sin sentido es la pelea contra antología el es demasiado fuerte como para q peleen contra el gildartz y natsu especialmente un natsu tan joven. Gildartz tubo que escapar de el y nisiquiera peleo enserio no creo q natsu haya echo la me gusta q natsu sea poderoso y q sea un santo mago aunque no me agrado el asesino oc que creaste en cuanto a personalidad si me agrado pero sentí q salio de la nada y estaba muy roto con creo q fueron 3 elementos. También sentí q este natsu es mas fuerte que el laxus del anime en ese momento así q no veo como piensa pelear contra natsu en su arco amenos q entrenando con natsu también el se volviera fuerte

I like the new story title. I look forward to more man. Keep up the good work, I can’t wait!

There is something fundamentally wrong with this story. Its isn't the grammar or anything like that. It's the fact that you take a simple issue and complicate it till it's so overblown that I honestly don't care for the resolution because the issue became so stupid. If you want drama, then make it compelling, don't make it so everyone in your story has the IQ of a squirrel that's fallen a few too many times.

For the record, this isn't me flaming but honestly criticizing. This story has potential but you taking what is probably the biggest downfall of most modern shows/animes and amplifying them isn't something I want to read. Of course that's me so feel free to ignore me.

I know this is an old chapter and this has been adopted by someone new but I felt the need to make my point on what I felt is wrong with the story I read so far.