This is a really good story that I really enjoyed! It made me emotional, both sad and happy, at all the right points!

This was a fun short story.

Great story as a for a new story you could focus on Lincolns other older sisters as well as his younger sisters on what they would do if someone insulted or bulling there brother.

Great story for future ideas focus on the Lincolns other older sisters as well as is younger sisters.

Great start keep up the good work :3

Damn this is a really good story
Update soon

great story bro keep it up

great start so far

Well, it's a first attempt. To be honest, it's not that bad... Compared to the rest of course.

My issues are: you get extremely repetitive win your language, causing readers to be disengaged before they reach the meat.

More importantly, if this fic follows Lynn and Lincoln, why show the real world following the whole family? Don't get me wrong, it's fine, but a lot comes off as unnecessary to the prompt.

Good job mate, I don't rate first fanfics.

Dammit! Why don't people ever serve justice the right way!? Ugh, nevermind.
That was the only thing that disappointed me. Otherwise, the story was good. It showed alot of drama. Keep it up! -The Critik
10/10
(Sorry that its short. Im tired)