After re-reading this three years later I agree with my initial findings. This is awesome. I really loved reading it. I especially loved the twist, and all the little hints that were in place before the twist came to light. I thank you very much for sharing this lovely tale with us all.

Interesting...

After reading Never Forget I went looking to see if there was more to the story... and here it is! I've read this pairing before but never a mob story were Petter/Bella being the main pairing on the story. So I'm excited for this one.

Wonderful story! Love when the Captain comes out and play. Almost as I love the Major. (Sigh) The sigh is mandatory when both are mentioned. Thanks for sharing

I love this story it was so amazing and when the plot twisted it surprised me but I loved it :) you did an amazing job with it!

ah but this was lovely. I do adore Peterlove it!

incredible loved it :) great work - haley

Wow! Just, Wow! This story was amazing from the first chapter, but the twist was unexpected, yet extremely welcome! Very well written!

That was not at all what I was expecting. That twist got me. This story was amazing! So glad I read it.

This is the first Bella/Peter fic I've read, and I really enjoyed it. It was an interesting, and unique plot - something I haven't encountered before. I love that it wasn't just your run of the mill AH fic. Great job, great writing.

I can feel the author hate for Edward throughout the story which was disappointing. Its 2017 and fic authors still can't seperate their personal feeling of a character to write something decent. I could have enjoy this if there was no Edward at all instead of throwing him in there for the same bullshit in every non canon stories. Thanks for writing tho

WOW! What an interesting tale... LOVE Peter and Bella stories. :D

Now that was fun!

While I like the premise of your story, I had some trouble following everything. It felt like there was a chunk missing right before the "bust gone wrong". I think there was just too much information in too few chapters. I'm still glad I read it as there were some extreme plot twists so thank you very much for sharing it with the rest of us.

This story was fucking awesome. I loved it and so wasn't expecting that twist half way through. I knew you would do something epic but didn't think it be that.