This story is really amazing. Best fanfiction I've read in a really long time, and it's really descriptive. It also makes it feel like your in the world of destiny, and it's really cool how you included all of the other characters like Cayde and Ikora.
Amazing job!

This is really good! I, too, am writing a destiny fanfiction!

And the story keeps getting better and better, looking forward to seeing the next chapter!

"I don't trust my weapons, I use them" Damn! Vell has some serious advice right there.

Been loving this arc since the beginning, but I think this is my favorite so far. Particularly the way you depict Crota opening that wound in reality and letting the Vex into the universe. Didn't expected that scene tbh, but I'm glad you did.

Also seems like we have troubles in paradise. I kinda get what Eriana is trying to do here, but the logical side of me would most likely second Eris. Eriana is not thinking at this point and is action on pure emotions. Damn, now I can't wait for the next chapter...

Anyways, glad you continue this story. Oh, also congrats for being aunt! :)

One question, is a gun that bounces an RvB reference at all, I know it’s talking about fighting lion

Omnigul is in a tough situation there. Hope everything will be alright.

Damn, I feel bad for Omnigul. ;(

This is getting more and more interesting as it goes on. Keep it up!

good job cant wait for the next chapter

Great chapter! I can't wait to see where this goes from here!

The Hive are the real hypocrites.

good chapter cant wait for the next

I like how the enemies have actual personalities unlike the ones in the actual game. They feel like actual characters instead of just obstacles that shoot things at you. Good work.

you should make it so ether kaylas dad, mom, or brother also come back to life

The battle at the beginning was intense. Definitely fun to read a good battle. :)