Not bad I can’t wait to see the next one.

This story is so freaking creative and awesome like I cannot get over it! Literally shotgunned the whole thing throughout the day.

Totally looking forward to the next arc :D!

This is beautiful I mean I’m trying not to cry but I did shed some quiet tears

It's very nice to finally see Diana get all kinds of loving! This may even include interaction with Dia-chan (Buu Buu Desu Wa)! I'm not sure how much I believe Elizabeth when she claims her messed up words were affected by black words. Diana has been around her peers for far longer and Amanda for example shows no sign of greyed words. So Akko doesn't have her words yet? That really makes me wonder, what if she never gets any words? Or what happens if her words are black as well? In such a case it seems like Akko would be perfectly safe as Diana's soulmate. And it's becoming really freaking clear that Akko is Diana's soulmate! Oh Diana, don't go and freak out about all this delightful Diakko intimacy later on!

The final scenes at the end highlighting various moments are really nice! It looks like Amanda is going to continue to struggle. Shiny Chariot is keeping up an act? Regarding what exactly? Her own words? Something Croix related? And of course my favorite new character Dia-chan! What could possibly be so dangerous?

Aaah yes, some sweet Dianakko you gave us...
Gotta say, what must she not know?!
Omg it was a very good chapter, as always, waiting patiently for the next arc! Take your time! If you wanna konw, I am ready to wait as long as you need to update, just to read the next chapter.

OwO! And in the end of the massive arc there are big, big revelations! But with them questions arise! I am excited what Elizabeth, Ursula and Dia are hiding from her. Whatever it is, the ending scene suggests a trip to "someone's" family manor! EXCITING! It is worth the wait. I love this, I LOVE THIS! Also, the updating plan (if I can call it that way) it's fantastic. This hungry person here will be more than happy to read on that way! O_O Also, also, GANBARUBY with life!

I’d nominate you for best plot of the year. This silly fanfic has a better plot line then half the stories and manga I’ve read... And those guys got their stuff published! At least I know that the LWA fan base is still alive! If I can finish up my RWBY fic, I’m going to write a LWA because this plot line is freaking amazing.

this is awesome man

Things really turned out a lot better than I anticipated. I think Akko's right about what this outcome means. The way the situation was resolved shows Diana, even at moments of extreme desperation, didn't give in to her anger and hate. If this isn't an acceptable acid test in terms of the non-evil nature of Diana I don't know what is. I'm curious as to where things go from here. Even if Diana wiped Lyn's memory this big battle is still happened, little witches are still damaged, and the haters are still hating.

I can't say I cried but some parts were rather shocking. The image of a lifeless Barbara desperately holding on to Hannah was especially disturbing.

Wow you went over 9000 for this chapter... I'm like yooo is Diana going to become some monster or whatever? What about Lyn? Is she gonna die? Is Akko ok? WoN't ShE bE hAtInG DiAnA?! And then you give us the hug while Diana is in a total paranoïa and wow I'm glad this chapter was like, super long and super cool and wow that fight? 100/10

I have waited for this for so long! Q_Q Glad I am, for finally reading it!

So, you almost make me tear up. So close right? But guess what. This was written so. Fucking. Beautifully. I don’t know how but you’ve done something I’ve been trying to do for so long, need the freaking characters. Akko isn’t some magical god or anything, she just makes shit up on the fly. And that’s what she did here. Diana is a magical genius but compared to a fourth year, she was outmatched. But then that ending part with the black words. I’ve seen a lot of anime and that scene was STRAIGHT from an anime. But it was so GOOD. Man, I haven’t gotten a rush like that since last week. A sort of ‘evil within’ kind of vibe from Diana which makes me wonder, what the actual fuck do black words do?! Like they kill their soul mate, curse people around them with bad luck and misfortune but I guess they ALSO give you ‘hacks mode on!’ Powers if you need a bit of fighting OP energy if you’re near death. I mean, concept, unoriginal but how you did it was just... I’m looking for a word that means more then super fucking ultra omega fanfuckintastic! Man! Thank you. I’ll be there went you post next, believe it!

Diana still hasn't really committed, although she's getting closer.
At this point I think she needs to embrace the power of her dark magic and finish the damn job. There will be plenty of time for self-recrimination later but for now she needs to put that shit on hold and save her and Akko's life. It would be nice if she could subdue this Lyn witch but it doesn't seems like she has that luxury. It only makes sense that she go ahead and kill her while she's still capable.

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