Reviews for Broken Moon
The Rose in Death's Garden chapter 3 . 4/4/2017
I like the title of this chapter. The title for the second chapter seems out of sync with the more serious titles for chapters 1 & 3.

Oh, this is too cute! Those two are STILL bickering, even when they're being all cute and cuddly with each other. I guess that's just the way they tend to interact. XD

Ozpin doing the dishes is a nice touch since he's already been shown to have taken on the peacemaker/caretaker role in the relationship.

I wonder if Glynda's semblance can actually be used for healing wounds or if that would end up being... messy.

Ozpin being nervous and unsure of himself was interesting, because we never really see him second-guessing his decisions in the anime, but this is different than "leadership" decisions because it's his personal life.

Yes, Qrow, stop resisting the relationship! :D I look forward to seeing where you go with it from here.
The Rose in Death's Garden chapter 2 . 3/24/2017
This is weirdly adorable. lol, Qrow and Glynda can't stop arguing with each other no matter what.

This pairing doesn't seem like it should work, but you make it work. I imagine poor Ozpin must get pretty fed up with having to play peacemaker when those two are fighting.

It might have been a struggle to get there but everyone got exactly the kind of snuggles they needed in the end! :D
The Rose in Death's Garden chapter 1 . 3/22/2017
Lamia writing poly? I can hardly believe it! XD

Ah, that first line really reminds me of Final Fantasy Unlimited.

I admit the pairing isn't really one I would have thought of and they seem a little awkward together here. (Although that might be the point since it seems like Qrow is trying to push them away.)

Glynda and Qrow just arguing the whole time and Oz being the voice of reason fits their personalities well. I'm interested to see where you go with it from here, and how this piaring works out in the long-term.
Dragon MoonX chapter 2 . 3/15/2017
Be nice, Glynda, and let the birb play with your hair.

And there's poor Oz, trying to get some sleep while those two are arguing and moving around. It can't be comfortable trying to fit three people in a bed. And it doesn't help that birb boy is trying to make a nest in his girlfriend's hair.

[Oz's pajama pants became hopeless twisted] Ouch. I bet that hurts. Also, it should probably be "hopelessly twisted". Not "hopeless twisted".

Oz and Qrow are so cute at the end of this chapter. Though it probably annoys Glynda that they can't stop moving around. But I think it's sweet how Qrow traces patterns on Oz's belly and Oz runs his fingers through Qrow's hair. They are adorable. :3
Violet Lunar Wolf chapter 3 . 3/13/2017
Drinky Qrow drank too much and passed out on the couch. And Glynda is there to put a blanket on her cute birb.

These two are adorable. I like the scene where he surprises her by pulling her onto his lap. So cute. :3

This was actually really sweet. They're both there for Qrow to fix him and look after him since the poor guy is such a mess (and I really do like Qrow. There's something about his character, especially in this chapter, that appeals to me).

I think the best part was when Oz and Glynda came together in the end for Qrow. It's nice seeing someone like him getting love and support from them. And yes, you should definitely stray, Qrow. Stay with these nice people and let snek write more stories about you.
Dragon MoonX chapter 1 . 2/25/2017
A spot of bad timing there, with the dishes shifting and the glass breaking on the floor. Maybe it's a case of bad luck instead of him being clumsy and dropping stuff? And yes, Qrow is lucky to have someone like her who can easily fix the things he breaks. That skill probably comes in handy for when he gets drunk and ends up breaking something by accident.

Ozpin has a good point. I mean, if he didn't wait until the dishes were piled sky high, there would be less chance of one of them breaking.

Good to see Qrow learned his lesson about not letting the dirty dishes accumulate. Maybe now there will be less work for Glynda.
Enchanted Pines chapter 1 . 2/25/2017
Welp Qrow won't be cleaning those dishes. Good luck Glynda.