That was wonderful! You managed to pull off having both Sammy and Frank in the story without making it... bleh. Splendid job!

Cuteeeee, love it!

Cute, cool, and interesting.

I have come across your stories a while ago, but today i decided to just re-visit your page. You have amazing writing skills, amd your flawless combination of dialogue, storytelling and narratives is truly impressive. In the vast world of fanfic authors, your well-wtitten stories are something I will return to frequently. This particular story that spans Hazel's complex history was beautiful, and I especially love the last thrown-in song lyric. The whole thing was so cute, and also sadly reminescient of Hazel's lost past.

Oh! That last line was a song lyric! I love little twists like that! My heart skipped!

This. Was. So. Cute.
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But seriously, this was ADORABLE. I loved the girls bonding over periods (I can totally picture Piper swearing up a storm every month XD) and literally everything about this was perfect. Beautiful, fantastic job! :):):)

I hope you know you're brilliant. You have a beautiful way of balancing all the components of the story and weaving them together into a vibrant and three dimensional world, with real characters who are more than just a list of their abilities and preferences. Each and every one of the characters you write have their own strong voices and distinct personalities. There are a lot of authors out there in the world who struggle to achieve that connection with their characters in their one book. You on the other hand take on so many different characters and make them speak uniquely. I just want to make sure you realize this talent of yours is remarkable and that it is appreciated.

My interests over the years have changed, but you're writing has stayed a constant. Thank you for this story and for them all.

This was super cute! It makes me want to go dancing now! ️

That is the sweetest, cutest, and most insightful fic I've read all morning! I never really thought about the colored not having many activities, but it seems obvious in retrospect. Also, Hazel is involved so it's automatically awesome fluff

Aw that was so cute I loved that I love them

This is the damn cutest and sad thing I've read. Also your intro of Mama Bird was pretty damn cute.

love the chapter! stayed up late to read it tho. it's now 2am, and i need to go to bed. looking forward to the next one!