Also, everything is so brief and has no detail or description.

Chapters are way too short.

Eh...I really didn't like this chapter at all. The death scenes weren't descriptive, and since there's no mention of timeline jumps, it looks like Sabine lost both parents in the same day.

Mauls ship is called the Nightbrother

I really love the plot and where your ideas are taking you. Great story, but could I just highly recommend longer, more thought out chapters? Everything seems so rushed with short chapters. Put in all of your main points and stories, but add some filler moments, interactions we wouldn't expect. Things that would provide more story, interest, and excitement to the story. Almost random thoughts or ideas that go along with the current plot. If you did this, I truly believe this story would take a massive step forward.
PS; You're writing will no doubt improve with more experience. Don't doubt yourself and your abilities. Keep writing and watch your story flourish.

I have feeling the next few episodes will be very similar to your story. However I am not sure maul will be killed since he is so popular. However I could be wrong. Also, i have a feeling Ezra will be leading the mandalorians into battle instead of Sabine.

we know the episodes don't coincide. Ezra is on Atollon when the attack happens

So now Ezra can be Mand'alor now. He beat maul in a duel (despite it being a two on one) and now has sole claim to the darksaber. How will Sabine and the other mandalorians react? We will see... next time!

Ezra only took pieces of the Jedi Holocron. and we know the argument will be a bit more heated than that.

:)

Keep going!