Ever read a fanfiction that's better than an original book? This is it. It's... Wow. Beyond anything I could ever imagine.

(oops i forgot to mention this in my review but the cover art! it's so cute, i love it! 3)

That was so nice! I love this story so much, the writing, the characterisation, the whole premise, the way you've incorporated canon into the storyall of it! I love Vash's narration here, grumpy and pragmatic and untrusting, and I love how all the characters are so human, with their own flaws. I also love how the mystery progresses, and Vash's and Matthew's investigation, and I love how we're given hints that help us figure out what might have happened, but that aren't too obvious. And I'm so happy it wasn't just left at the whole "power of friendship" thing; theories were discussed, but there isn't really a concrete answer, and that made for such a fantastic ending.

Good job, and thanks for writing this incredibly sweet, incredibly fun story! :D

Hi Nora,
I'm replying to you here since I can't message you. If you read "Oni Origins" (on my Quotev account) and you hadn't heard of HetaOni before that, then I guess I am the one that introduced you :). If you're thinking of a different fanfic, then no, that probably wasn't me.
If you enjoyed HetaOni, I would recommend Dreamtalia (another HetaGame).

To all:
I am currently on hiatus, but I have several projects in mind. Now all I have to do is wait until I have enough inspiration to continue working on one of them.

A few months ago I decided to skip ahead and read to the end. Not bad, not bad. I like this. I wonder what other stories you're going to post. If I remember correctly... you were the one that introduced me to HetaOni, right? Indirectly?

That was really good! The ending was very satisfying, and all loose ends were tied up. The theme of friendship was consistent throughout, and I could never tell where the plot was headed, there were so many twists! In Exchange made for a very good fanfic that I really enjoyed reading. It was a great combination of fluff and angst, and it had me contemplating the ending more than once. I'm sad that it's over, though. :( Thanks so much for writing it, and I hope to see more from you in the future!

I love your story! Thank you for writing it. As sad as I am to see it end, all good things must. Great work on keeping the reader (me in this case) engaged. (ADHD sucks) You are an awesome writer!

I loved this story, from start to finish. I'm almost sad to see it end, but I'm quite satisfied with the ending, and think that this is a good way to end it. Overall, just a really nice fanfic to read, and kind of refreshing to see no romance for once in this fandom. It's sad to see this end though, I won't have anything to look forward to now lol.

And Herakles's sayings are resolved... I think this was a great ending!

I loved this story so much!

it's really confusing with belgium's situation... btw what happened to the small german-speaking part of belgium?

Well, things seem to be back to normal again... That's good! Are you planning on doing a sequel or something?

Holy Fu-GOD..Wow

NO NO NO WAIT
THERE ARE THREE REGIONS IN BELGIUM
WALLONIA
FLANDERS
AND BRUSSELS

WALLY
FLANNY
AND B
I SOLVED IT

HECK

I JUST REALIZED WHY WALLY AND FLANNY ARE NAMED LIKE THAT
Wallonia (French territory) Wally
Flanders (Dutch Territory) Flanny
The two merged together and made Belgium!
HOW DID I NOT KNOW THIS?!