I love this series so much. Ciara is so well written and I love your portrayal of Sasuke! Ciara and Naruto's bond is one of the best things about this series. There's so much lore and foreshadowing about the Shiryugu clan. The build up was wonderful and the stories and history behind her clan are fascinating. Suzaku is amazing and I love the history behind him. Hiro and Akito are the older brother-cousins I wish I had. Shisui and Itachi's relationship with Ciara fills me with warmth. I love how Ciara basically adopted all the kids around her age into her family. I can't wait to see what happens with Tobi and Zetsu and the rest of the war. I know this is totally uncalled for angst but you mentioned it in an AN a while back so here it goes - I really hope that Jiraiya is one of the ones revived in the Edo Tensei jutsu. It'd be extremely interesting to see how Naruto and Ciara react to that. How would her Dragon instincts take fighting someone that makes her whole being scream "PROTECT THEM"? Jeez, I just binge read this entire series over three or four days and there is so much that happened! I loved so much about this that it's impossible to mention it all here. OH! Another thing I really loved was Gaara and Ciara's relationship (and how she referred to all of the jinchuuriki as kin) and how their relationship evolved throughout the story. Tsunade's acceptance and desire to understand Ciara was another highlight. God, there was just so many great things about this series! However, as much as I love this story nothing is without flaws and how can I be happy with my review if it was all praises and no constructive criticism? So the most glaring thing is how overpowered Ciara is. While I can see the logical build up and the reasoning behind her growth (I mean she was wimpy as hell in the beginning of the first story) there cones a point where that growth of power becomes unreasonable, and Ciara is very close to passing that point if she hasn't already. It seems like she's untouchable, like nobody she'll come across will ever pose a challenge or a danger to her life. It seems like Ciara could take down even Kaguya, who is supposed to be the most powerful being in history and should invoke a sense of hopelessness and despair in any opponent, with a bit of effort. She stood against Pain basically on her own and even after Naruto pretty much was defeated, Ciara was only disabled after protecting someone else (which I mean yeah that's her whole gig but STILL) and even then just a few moments before that she was capable of building up the power to shatter the rods holding her in place. Her power level is too much and unless there's a glaring weakness I don't know about, she could pretty much fight a good portion of the war all by herself. Another thing I have a bit of an issue with is Sasuke and Ciara's relationship buildup. There were hints of interest back before he left the village but they could be easily misconstrued as Sasuke's eerie fixation with someone he thinks is strong and who he wants to fight. Then there is the fact that up until Ciara's rescue from the Akatsuki she only referred to him as her cousin in her mind. While I really do like their dynamic, it just feels like you weren't quite sure where you were going in the romance department until that prison break where you decided to pair the two up. It seemed very abrupt to me, which is unusual considering how well you foreshadow and build up everything else. Ciara's decision to just jump on Sasuke's bird and fly away without explanation to those right in front of her seems a bit out of character and too whimsical based on her past actions. She was always very good about at least telling Naruto she'll be fine/be in touch/see him soon/let him know where's she going. It just seemed unnatural and unusual based on her past. It may just be me being nitpicky but those two issues (her overpoweredness and the relationship with Sasuke) were pretty noticeable and confusing to me. Other than that, this is a wonderfully written beast of a series (just how I like it - long and intricate) and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Omg I hope your doing ok! Stay safe and healthy! :) I’ll be waiting here to support your story!

NOOOO FUUUU! SHE'S MY FAVORITE CHARACTER!

Is this story abandoned? Damn

Omfg I forgot how much I missed this story hope you are doing good. 3 If you are ever interested in continuing this story I will hopefully be here to see it. 3 Stay safe and happy.

I forgot how much I missed this story hope you are doing good. (: If you are ever interested in continuing this story I will hopefully be here to see it. :) Stay safe and happy

Please please update

why the heck didnt you continue?! it was getting super great! i want more please?

Love it live for it just all around yesss! A nice subtle comeback chapter A. :) Though poor baby suigetsu was about to get that ass beat.

I liked how a lot of characters had moments in this chapter, even minor characters like Aimi. She's definitely eager to help and kinda reminds me of a golden retriever. Points to her for saying how many people showed up instead of being vague.

It was nice to see Karin and Ciara have a moment as well and to see Ciara attempt to explain Uchiha/Ciara psychology there, lol.

Ino was moderately terrifying with her excellent reading of body language there.

Still, you did a great job showing Sakura coming to grips with everything and trying to help aid in the war effort as well. I say that as someone who doesn't like Sakura. It's good to see her try to handle things in a mature way and that it wasn't just a lightswitch transition.

Suigetsu was wonderfully Suigetsu with his suspicion, gruff form of communication, and hilariousness. Lol, poor Jugo. The shade. The shade. Suigetsu was right, though. It's a very sensitive time. They really should have warned people ahead of time. Lol, poor Suigetsu.

Hilarious ending. Jugo got a little sassy there.

Great chapter. I liked how the old man addressed what was being done for every member of Taka and Ciara. Lol, it was almost like a mini character profile on all of them in how they would respond in that type of situation. Sasuke was very in character and that's the sort of thing he would pull to get his way. The cuddly moments were well described. There was definitely some research into the medical components as well.

Please update the story soon!

Author sama where are you
Please update more of this amazing story

Love this chapter you get to see Sasuke and Ciara get so much closer. I fucking love it :)) I cannot wait to see more of them being cuddly with each other. And maybe more jealous Sasuke.
Hopefully you are ok and you update soon:) have a wonderful day!:)

Can't wait for more updates on this amazing story

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