Reviews for Underworld Love Story (Being Rewritten)
Claude Amelia Song chapter 18 . 8/5/2018
Okay. This is gold. Your way of portraying everyone is gold. Awesome. Thank you for this story. I love it.
StarViking chapter 11 . 5/23/2018
I was wondering how you were gonna justify Persephone staying and getting to know Hades better. You did a good job!
StarViking chapter 10 . 5/23/2018
I really love Hades in this chapter.
StarViking chapter 4 . 5/23/2018
I like that you have Pirithous and Theseus show up this early in the story. Most fanfics have them show after H&P get married.
HP fan chapter 18 . 4/28/2018
Yay, that was great! I read the Hades and Persephone shorts already and can't wait for the stories!
Gau meo chapter 18 . 4/28/2018
Omg omg! I love the last two chapters, especially this one. It's so beautiful and warm and funny and sweet. I love that you corrected my mistake by adding Rhea to the wedding. Yes! She's exactly how I image her would react even the way she called Hades 'Aidon' awww! Thank you so very much for finishing this story! 3 3
madame thome chapter 18 . 4/28/2018
Persephone had a wonderful wedding! Ah bummer only together for one night and then had to wait six months. What a big challange. Bet it felt like 600,000 years to them and they were very happy when they got back together.
JOSIMAR chapter 18 . 4/27/2018
Beautiful!
JOSIMAR chapter 17 . 4/27/2018
I LOVED HADES.
Guest chapter 14 . 12/24/2017
Congrats on your acceptance! Please update. So cute. Love this.
madame thome chapter 16 . 12/25/2017
Ah a wonderful happy reunion!
GraceEliz chapter 16 . 12/25/2017
The owl definitely works. Ooh, I can't wait for more!
HP fan chapter 14 . 12/5/2017
Very good story so far. I read all of this story and the actual comic by Gau Meo. Both are really good. I liked that you added extra small details that are not in the comic but are in this story. Did you know that Gau Meo has to remove the last four chapters of the comic due to publishing agreements or something like that? I suggest that you check it out. Good luck with your university course. Hopefully you can update regularly and still get to read the comic.
gau meo chapter 15 . 11/20/2017
I'm so happy that you continue this fic and congratulation :D :D
josimar chapter 15 . 11/19/2017
Congratulations on your approval. And there was already his missing his fanfic. When will the next chapter come out?
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