ASDDSDJADS ROY LOVES HIS DOGS SO MUCH HJDSHSJ (i'm so happy you updated )

You must continue this...pls update asap ... I need continuation asdfghjhgf!

Me: Still in awe that you literally created your own language for the sake of this fic, like when has your fave ever.
Anyways, I think I could read 3000000000 of your fics and still constantly be in awe of how beautifully you write the characters, and just how beautifully you write in general.
I WISH YOU COULD HAVE SEEN MY FACE WHEN THEY WERE KISSING. THEY ARE /KISSING/.
I also think you've weaved in the Ishvallan language perfectly, not overdoing it, but giving us enough of a taste of the language that like, I want to know more.
Beautiful as always, and I can't wait to read the next chapter! (You're going to break my heart soon aren't you?)

Oh the wait is worth it!

Amazing chapter, I can see you are deep in researching for this fanfiction and I'm loving the results! Your writing is simply amazing and I'll patient (but anxiously) looking forward to more!

*clicks on next chapter*

I love this story and your Ishvalan language so much. I can see all the hard work you're putting into it and I am floored. Can't wait for the next chapter!

interesting, hey never know, there were too many implications of them having a thing lol but overall this is a good start, keep at it, I look forward to the rest of this

I am beyond pumped for this! THIS BEGINNING WAS GREAT. So much world building. I thought I'd be out off by the words but NOPE. I'M HERE I'M READY AND STRAPPED IN FOR THIS RIDE. You are SO TALENTED ANA.

First off, I still can't believe you created your own language for this fic.
Riza and Rebecca ! Rebecca embarrassing Riza is honestly my aesthetic, I hope we get to see more of her in this fic, for real.
This was definitely a great start, I can't wait for the rest of the fic and to see where this goes!

Huh, interested so far : o I don't feel Riza being..."Riza" like her dialogue didn't seem to sound like her to me(when talking with Rebecca) but whatever. Other than that, I'm interested in the plot.

This is beautifully thought out. I love the world building already. I'm guessing Samir is Scar? I feel like with all the love and unprofessionalism that is happening and can be seen (and happens just like this, actually), you are going to break my heart because someone from HQ is going to come over and see it and like separate them or something because they think they can't do their jobs. Although I did love him shouting at her. That was funny.

Great job you did there describing how your Ishval looked like. Oh hey Becky nice to see you here! XD And yet another multichapter story I got hooked into? God, you're indulging (and killing) me

This is super interesting, it seems you put a lot of work to describe the scenario and Ishavalan culture. I'm looking forward to read more : )

Wow, this is so good. Please keep doing what you do. I can't wait for the next chapter!