Too sad you finished it on a cliffhanger, it's been now 1 year and I'm still waiting for the next chapter...

This chapter was simply awesome... I truly love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter... You're are an awesome author..:-)

awesome, please don't stop this story

Wow... dead wrong as usual. Did not expect this but this is still pretty good.

Wow I fell bad for ash found out his Id is not working and having no idea wants going on and I hope he Csn got of this miss and find his friends again

Wow... Can't wait for next chapter...

I feel like you wrote this before...Who cares it's beaudimus. Keep it up *claps*

Thank goddes ash got away for that weirdo and I fell bad for his new friend David turned into a flearon and I hope ash and him can find their way home and get help

Wow... I love it...
Please update soon

Hey, that's pretty good! Idubbz memes aside I think this will be an interesting story :) So pumped for next week

awesome, please don't cancel the story again

Somehow, I can't help but feel that this will lead back to the first day he left Pallet Town. Other than that, you're off to a good start. Keep it up.

I hope ash can get out this and get back to his friendship soon